| "Cracking My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 102 ] |
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Title: cracking review
Reviewed By: kikiosabitch On: August 11, 2005 22:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far your story is great. I stayed up all night reading them. I'm looking forward to the chapters ahead and I hope they're out soon.
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Title: Your freakin awesome!
Reviewed By: kaoru_kira [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 21:19 EDT
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Im usually not into stories set outside the inuyasha world but this one is very... very good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter which i hope will be up soon.Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: chesterzerousygirl On: August 08, 2005 16:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome.. just awsome.. i cant think of any words to say at the moment. cant wait till the next chapter! hehehe
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Title: Cracking My Heart
Reviewed By: raven rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 21:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya!!!!!!!!! Woot!!!!!! Perfecto!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your new chapter it was great. i hope you write soon. thanks for r&R my story. moonlight eyes has a new chapter. til the next review.
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Title: Awesome chapter
Reviewed By: Mallie3 (not logged in) On: August 07, 2005 18:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good Lemon that last chapter had. I am in love with this story. Nicely done. I can't wait for more. :)
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Title: Cracking My Heart
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 16:31 EDT
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I read your author's note, and I completely agree. Even though both start wity a game of truth or dare, the story lines completely split from there. Both are very good stories. I just wanted you to know that. I like your story very much, I am enjoying the plot building, and the conversation flows smoothly. I REALLY loved it when she threw a pan at his head. I'm glad you didn't make him a total bastard, I love Inu-chan very much. He reminds me of my son. Sullen, angry, foul mouthed, with a heart as big as Texas, and I'm glad you didn't make Kagome a total wuss. She has spunk, a sense of fair play, and a very kind heart. I'm also hoping that you'll find a way to have her family forgive her. They alway seemed so close to me, but for the sake of the fic, it had to be. Sigh, angst, it makes life interesting.
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Reviewed By: Kira562 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 02:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More more more more more more more more more!!
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: ~Kagome~ On: August 06, 2005 22:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THE FAN FIC.YOUR VERY TALENTED AS A WRIGHTER.CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT.
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Sweetstuff On: August 06, 2005 21:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg....i think that u are doing such a good job at ur stories..expecially this one..i cant wait tell u write the 7 chapter....im so excited and i hope that u dont stop writing them because i could read them for ever...i do hope though that u could do more then 10 chapters..:p cuz that would be just awsome..!!!
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Title: NICE!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter. as always you have delivered an awsome update. i cant wait till your next chapter is posted. so i will wait here till then:-)
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is so sweet and romantic. I love both your story and I Dare You but, as you said, they aren't anything alike after the first chapter. Keep up the awesome chapters!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 18:20 EDT
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Hey this chapter was great. i loved it. and if you didn't read my story moonlight eye it has a new chapter. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: AcYdE_ReYnE [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 23:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
Awww...how sweet. I love your story. update when you can 1
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Title: I'm sooooooooo happy!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 12:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An update and so soon. You have made me so happy. it was an awsome chapter just like all the rest ;-)please oh please keep them comeing. i really love your story. P.S. have i mentioned how talented i think you are?
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