| "Cracking My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 102 ] |
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Title: you know, this hsould definitely be the daily-update type of fic!
Reviewed By: ish On: August 01, 2005 03:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm astounded, i honeslty am!! i love this completely and i seriously can't wait for the next chapter, i'm antsy in my chair!!! poor Kagome, and poor inuyasha as well! i sympathize both situations, the pregnant single girl with a baby-daddy who cheted on her, the guy who realizes what he lost and wants it back because he didn't have a reason to trust before and now he does. its beautiful, really. i commend you on your stupendous job, and i'm sure the next update will be as amazing as your first couple of chapters. i can not wait!
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Reviewed By: Little Owl On: July 31, 2005 23:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
INUYASHA IS A BLOODY JERK. Making out with Kikyo after he used Kagome like that and didn't even feel ashamed!!!!!! Kagome and Sango's fury is very enjoyable especially if aimed at a certain two timing jerk. Though i didn't really understand the reason why Inu cheated on Kags so cruelly in the first place if he liked dating her??? Please please continue!!!!!
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Title: COOOOOOL
Reviewed By: KOGASGIRL132 On: July 31, 2005 22:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS VERY UNIQUE AND INTERESTING! UPDATE SOON! I'M CRAVING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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Reviewed By: Sagittariusgr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 22:05 EDT
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That was good update soon
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Reviewed By: Foamyfun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 17:30 EDT
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i love it! great beginning! update soon!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: July 31, 2005 14:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. I hope Kagome makes Inuyasha pay dearly for what he did to her. Please update as soon as you can. I really want to see where you take this.
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Reviewed By: Kira562 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 13:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!! I love this! It rocks!!
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Reviewed By: Jessi Mae On: July 31, 2005 05:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update! ASAP! this story is great......wait, more than great.
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Reviewed By: Biteswhenprovoked [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 04:45 EDT
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damn i love this. i dont think i've read anything like this and i read a lot. please update.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. I like how you have Kagome not going back to Inuyasha. She should make him pay. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 02:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i loved your story please write more chapters soon. oh and please R&R my story moonlight eyes. thanks
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Title: PLEASE!!! I'm desperate!
Reviewed By: yuni On: July 31, 2005 01:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why?! It was getting so good. Please hurry up and update it.
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