| "Cracking My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 102 ] |
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 18:20 EDT
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Hey this chapter was great. i loved it. and if you didn't read my story moonlight eye it has a new chapter. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: AcYdE_ReYnE [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 23:48 EDT
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Awww...how sweet. I love your story. update when you can 1
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Title: I'm sooooooooo happy!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 12:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An update and so soon. You have made me so happy. it was an awsome chapter just like all the rest ;-)please oh please keep them comeing. i really love your story. P.S. have i mentioned how talented i think you are?
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Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 08:25 EDT
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i dont care what anyone else says, your work is way diffrent then 'i dare you'. The two of you even have your own writing styles. Personally i love your story and its on my favorits list. So with that said i also wanted to say that i love your story and cant wait till you update next-which i do hope is soon-. so ill go now and stop repeting myself. JA!! I hope that your feeling better by the way.
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Reviewed By: Prb651991 On: August 04, 2005 07:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought that it was a good way to end it i cant wait to read the next chappie
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 00:20 EDT
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I am loving this story. It is so beautifully written and the plot is very original. I've never a read a fic where she got preganant AFTER the break up. Also, hte realtionship between Kagome and InuYasha is very cute. Anyways, good luck and I wish you prosperity. ^_^!
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Title: loven it!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 00:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is different from all the othere's i have read and i got to say it is Awsome!! i cant wait for your next chapter. P.S. hope you feel better soon :-)
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Reviewed By: Lynny On: August 03, 2005 23:58 EDT
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this fic is great...you got creativness in ur head ^_^. but yeah the first chappy did remind me alot of I Dare You (not the rest though) but still, it's good
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Reviewed By: kaogmeinuxx On: August 03, 2005 23:40 EDT
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you fic is just like I Dare You from another author... are you copying or something? its exactly like it.
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 23:23 EDT
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ooh I love your story! It's so sweet! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Title: Great start
Reviewed By: Mallie3 (not logged in) On: August 03, 2005 15:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I think this is so cute so far. I hope Kagome does accept him, but I always love to see little obsticals along the way!! I love it hun keep it up! :)
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Title: guh, stupid kikyou!
Reviewed By: ish On: August 02, 2005 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe her! and poor inuyasha, another bad situation caused by her... i cant wait to find out how he gets out of this one!
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Title: Oh come on where's the fourth chapter
Reviewed By: verkalovesyou... On: August 02, 2005 01:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg dude write the fourth chapter i can't wait lol you stuff is great i love how easy it is to read your writing if you ever have spare time please read one of mine called *finally together* love your stories verkalovesyou
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Reviewed By: lil_kags(sammi) On: August 02, 2005 00:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey.. i dont kno if u update on fanfic.net...but newayz..PLZ u need 2 make kag forgive inu..:(..(stupid kikyo)..sry..well plz update soon great chap. -lotz of peace n happiness- l8z
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Reviewed By: inuyashafanaticllmv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww poor kagome I like version better its erally good
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