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Reviewed By: reviewing On: August 12, 2005 21:02 EDT Comment/Review: I thought Hyu was only a few weeks old. Newborn babies don't watch movies or talk or reach for their parents. Their coordination and vision are not fully developed. They don't even roll over on their own until a few months old and don't crawl until after about five months. And Kagome herself would not be recovered enough after giving birth to have sex for at least five or six weeks. Even if Hyu is six weeks old, what you have described is not realistic.
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Title: NICE!!!! Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 12:52 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Finally an update!! and a great update it was. anyway keep up the good work and please dont make us wait to long for the next chapter.
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Title: Well Done!!!! Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 01:00 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Well done!!!! I'm quite enjoying this so far. You're bringing in the right amount of romance and drama into this fic to evenly balance it out. I love it! I'm happy that you didn't make Inuyasha a total bastard and Kagome a total suck. (I just adore my Inu-chan SO SO much! ^_^ and I absolutely hate it when Kagome is totally weak, so to speak and a sap) Keep up the awesome work!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next in this brilliant concoction of yours! Clarissa Ann Mirko P.S. Thanks for reviewing With or Without You!!!! I'll be updating soon!
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Title: cracking review Reviewed By: kikiosabitch On: August 11, 2005 22:49 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: So far your story is great. I stayed up all night reading them. I'm looking forward to the chapters ahead and I hope they're out soon.
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Title: Your freakin awesome! Reviewed By: kaoru_kira [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 21:19 EDT Comment/Review: Im usually not into stories set outside the inuyasha world but this one is very... very good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter which i hope will be up soon.Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: chesterzerousygirl On: August 08, 2005 16:30 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: awsome.. just awsome.. i cant think of any words to say at the moment. cant wait till the next chapter! hehehe
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Title: Cracking My Heart Reviewed By: raven rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 21:47 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ya!!!!!!!!! Woot!!!!!! Perfecto!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 18:52 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey i loved your new chapter it was great. i hope you write soon. thanks for r&R my story. moonlight eyes has a new chapter. til the next review.
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Title: Awesome chapter Reviewed By: Mallie3 (not logged in) On: August 07, 2005 18:29 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very good Lemon that last chapter had. I am in love with this story. Nicely done. I can't wait for more. :)
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Title: Cracking My Heart Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 16:31 EDT Comment/Review: I read your author's note, and I completely agree. Even though both start wity a game of truth or dare, the story lines completely split from there. Both are very good stories. I just wanted you to know that. I like your story very much, I am enjoying the plot building, and the conversation flows smoothly. I REALLY loved it when she threw a pan at his head. I'm glad you didn't make him a total bastard, I love Inu-chan very much. He reminds me of my son. Sullen, angry, foul mouthed, with a heart as big as Texas, and I'm glad you didn't make Kagome a total wuss. She has spunk, a sense of fair play, and a very kind heart. I'm also hoping that you'll find a way to have her family forgive her. They alway seemed so close to me, but for the sake of the fic, it had to be. Sigh, angst, it makes life interesting.
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Reviewed By: Kira562 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 02:02 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: More more more more more more more more more!!
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Title: love it Reviewed By: ~Kagome~ On: August 06, 2005 22:13 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOVE THE FAN FIC.YOUR VERY TALENTED AS A WRIGHTER.CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT.
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Title: Awsome Reviewed By: Sweetstuff On: August 06, 2005 21:54 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Omg....i think that u are doing such a good job at ur stories..expecially this one..i cant wait tell u write the 7 chapter....im so excited and i hope that u dont stop writing them because i could read them for ever...i do hope though that u could do more then 10 chapters..:p cuz that would be just awsome..!!!
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Title: NICE!!!! Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 20:57 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awsome chapter. as always you have delivered an awsome update. i cant wait till your next chapter is posted. so i will wait here till then:-)
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 19:31 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Your story is so sweet and romantic. I love both your story and I Dare You but, as you said, they aren't anything alike after the first chapter. Keep up the awesome chapters!
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