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Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since when can a review skip a story? And y'know....this is probably (ah screw it-I know it is) the BEST EdxOC fanfic out there. (I adore EdxOC fics because I don't like the other pairings.(EdxRoy [ewwww], EdxEnvy [Envy sucks, he killed Hughes! Hughes ownz!], EdxWinry [They actually just seem like best freinds to me], EdxAl [.....W..T..F? They are brothers! Kyodai! Brajta! C'mon!]) All the other EdxOC fics I've read suck BIG TIME. But yours is the best destiny-chan! Seperate Wings and Never Letting Go are kickass too! LOVE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111ONEONEONE srry, it's like 10 at night and i'm WIDE awake. Love the fic ^-^ *glomps Edo, Aru and Roi*
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Reviewed By: emeraldisles [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 15:53 CST
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Sorry sorry!! My review jumped stories. Don't ask how, I have no idea. Sorry for the mix up of the review below!! Keep up your work as well! ^.^
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Reviewed By: emeraldisles [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 15:51 CST
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Ahh!!! *bounces around* I love Marik!! He makes me chuckle! >.< And he sounded sexy tonight. lol. I really really really like this chapter. Info and yet enlightening...*kicks the witches* I can't wait until they fall off a cliff. ^.^ I can't wait till the next chapter!!!
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Title: ^--^*
Reviewed By: Little Sis Holly On: November 06, 2005 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Just Can't Stop Reading This Story.I Think This Is About My 12th Time Reading It!!Please Sis Update The Sequel...And Get your Head Into It And Not Just 'Seprate Wings'.I Need To Know What Happens Next.
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Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 01:19 CST
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that was good..... the ending actually brought tears to my eyes..... now i am off to read the sequel..... 10/10 as always adn keep up teh good work
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 On: October 12, 2005 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT!!!! couldn't wait to read more.Still wiping my eyes from that heart-wrenching ending. keep up the excellent work.
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 On: October 12, 2005 13:54 CDT
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this story was excellent!!!!!!please keep up the good work
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Flame Alchemist On: October 12, 2005 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this was one of the most emotional endings I have ever read. I am in my college library and had tears coming out of my eyes. The ending was amazing I love how you didn't go with the traditional happy ending and really it didn't give me closer this pair was original and I hope you make a sequel to this on how Ed tries to bring her back. I mean he spent years trying to get his mother back and he brought Lilly back once maybe he will quest for a way to bring Lilly back. I loved the story and I hung onto it's every word. Thank you for blessing this board with your amazing writing skills.
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Title: WAI!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: golden_haired_neko_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAI!!!!! *tears stream down face* Must go read sequel!!!! This one was soooo sad!!!! I just finished reading it and I'm sitting here with tears running down my face. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Can't Wait!!
Reviewed By: Soulless Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the final chapter, it was pretty good. I'm especially glad that you have decided to continue with your story and write a sequel, keep up the good work. Also please hurry and begin writing so that you don't keep your loyal fans in suspense ; ). Talk to you later bye! Alex
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Title: !!!!!^*^!!!!!
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!SIS YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!NOW I WON'T END OUT KILLING YOU!!!!!I'M DIEING OF SUSPENCE!!!!!!HURRY AND WRITE!!!!!!!!!LITTLE SISTER CAN CHARM BIG SISTER TO DO ANYTHING!!!^*^LOL
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Title: ;_;
Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made me cry. Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story kicks soooooo much ass!!!! I can't believe you killed Lilly! Oh please, for the love of all that is holy and good, write a sequel! You are such an awesome writer, I don't even care that you have typos anymore!!!!!!!! This is an awesome ending to an awesome story. *does puppy pout* Please write a sequel. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez. :(
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Title: *Cries*
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love Your Story Soo Much Sis.Thanxs For The Kind Words.I Really Am Not Going To Scream.Just Cry Tears Of Pain.Please Write A Part 2.I Encourage YOu To Do It.Your The Best friend/sister anyone could have.you've taught me soo much about writing and following my heart.i really feel like your younger sister. With All My Love Little Sis Holly
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Title: wow^.^
Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg somethings wrong with my comp cause it wouldnt let me write any reviews for mediaminer>.< but hopefully this one goes through cause i havent written a review for here in a long time. first of all, i would like to say that this is the best fanfiction that i have ever read for fullmetal alchemist, and im sad to see that it's ending. i cried when she died and im still teary now*i love riza T.T* I hope everything goes well for ed and lilly and rika(im on the edge of my seat cause of thhe suspense) Also, im starting an Envy rebelous club, and so far its only me lol *holds up banners of a badly drawn envy's face and an 'X' drawn over his face*Oh, yes, i can't wait to see your new anime story. plus, i think you should also make a sequel*even though the story's not done yet lol*. i know that any other stories that you will write will be just as kick butt as this one and i can't wait to read them. well, i have to go now, so TTFN and keep up the awsome writing^.^~Vadkakid~
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Title: Love It!
Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is soooooooooo good! I love it! Lilly and little Rika, are some of the coolest OCs I've ever seen! One last thing though, I'm not trying to flame you, but there are a lot of words that need to be spell checked, so please take care of that as soon as you can. Misspellings can make reading a lot less fun. But, still, this is a kickass story, I'm so anxious to hear the rest! See ya next review! Oh, and some other things, 1st, pleeeeease check out my story, InuJizen To Sara, and 2nd, Darth Hello Kitty,..... You suck. If you don't like someone's story, the DON'T READ IT!!! Oh and, how can Lilly be a Mary Sue if so many people like her? A Mary Sue is a female fanfiction character that has other worldly powers, is really just there to make the other characters antsy, and a OC that only the author likes. Get your facts straight before you say such mean things to someone who is only trying their best to write a good story. Sorry, but I just had to let that out. Ja Ne! ~HanyouAlchemist~
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