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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Deathismylife On: August 17, 2005 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very funny you had me worried for a second there well update soon plz
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: azncardfreak On: August 16, 2005 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok so i just finished reading it its great can wait for another one a little confusing the last couple chapters but great job though.
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Reviewed By: LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOOOHOOOOOOO!!!! That was damn good, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic please continue soon
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Title: Awsome Story
Reviewed By: Deathismylife On: August 14, 2005 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful and creative so write more please
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Nanaoj32G On: August 14, 2005 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Is Such A Good Story yet It's Sad But It Is Still Great!!!
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Reviewed By: Curly 211 On: August 14, 2005 00:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Darn that Winry! I am now sobbing cuz Ed is sad! ;_; Please bring back Lilly!
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Title: fanfic
Reviewed By: azncardfreak On: August 13, 2005 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The whole story was great, but there were a lot of spelling and grammar errors. I think if you fixed them this would be a superb story.
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Title: update
Reviewed By: azncardfreak On: August 12, 2005 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic try to update often. please fix your spelling errors. other than that GREAT job on the fanfic
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Reviewed By: azncardfreak On: August 11, 2005 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have alot of spelling and grammar mistakes which can lower your enjoyment factor of your fanfics.
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Title: Coolie
Reviewed By: Fanactic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! I must know what happens!
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Title: Getting better with time
Reviewed By: Soulless Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is soo awesome! I love it. All I have to say now is hurry up and start writting more! I really like the fact that you put the characters emotions and feelings into the story and they don't change from there over all persona from the anime. Over all this is one of the best fan fics I have ever read, especially since this is your first one that's even cooler.
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiyas! I really loved your fic! its my first FMA one^.^ anyways, the only bad thing is that i noticed a few spelling errors, but other than that, your fic is awsome!! I can't wait for more chapters. TTFN^.^~Vadkakid~
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Title: Review of Story
Reviewed By: Soulless Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fanfic is awesome! I of course like it because it's a complete mystery. It's very well thought out and written. The only real problem is the grammar. Other than that its really good.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: animeempress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 18:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice I can't wait to see what happens
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