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Title: Gasp!!
Reviewed By: edwardshot911 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fan fic I have came across for FullMetal Alchemist I cant wait till you update I neeeed to know what happens next!
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Title: Ugh Men
Reviewed By: Deathismylife On: August 19, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is it with men and bragging about what goes on in bed oh well a good story I think you don't need to listen to me but Lilly should get knocked up but if not I will keep reading so update soon
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Reviewed By: Tigera On: August 19, 2005 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! PLEASE undate it soon! I don't think I can wait anylonger....*faints* It's sooo....goood
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Title: Hiya
Reviewed By: Deadtothisworld On: August 18, 2005 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya I thing you doing good at this story so update soon and plz let ed pull through
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Deadtothisworld On: August 17, 2005 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey this si getting interesting and Ed will make it right? well update as soon as you can plz
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Deathismylife On: August 17, 2005 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very funny you had me worried for a second there well update soon plz
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: azncardfreak On: August 16, 2005 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok so i just finished reading it its great can wait for another one a little confusing the last couple chapters but great job though.
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Reviewed By: LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOOOHOOOOOOO!!!! That was damn good, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic please continue soon
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Title: Awsome Story
Reviewed By: Deathismylife On: August 14, 2005 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful and creative so write more please
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Nanaoj32G On: August 14, 2005 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Is Such A Good Story yet It's Sad But It Is Still Great!!!
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Reviewed By: Curly 211 On: August 14, 2005 00:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Darn that Winry! I am now sobbing cuz Ed is sad! ;_; Please bring back Lilly!
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Title: fanfic
Reviewed By: azncardfreak On: August 13, 2005 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The whole story was great, but there were a lot of spelling and grammar errors. I think if you fixed them this would be a superb story.
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Title: update
Reviewed By: azncardfreak On: August 12, 2005 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic try to update often. please fix your spelling errors. other than that GREAT job on the fanfic
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Reviewed By: azncardfreak On: August 11, 2005 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have alot of spelling and grammar mistakes which can lower your enjoyment factor of your fanfics.
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