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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 22:26 CDT
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Okay, I've been following this story for awhile and I must say this is one of the most best and planned out stories I've ever read. You made Lilly a likable character and I even approve of the Ed/Lilly pairing a lot. Lilly's been through so much and she's now one of my favorite OCs that I've read about. I'm not going to pick at your spelling errors(even though there are a few...BUT WHO CARES? THIS FIC ROCKS!) because it's hardly noticable because you write so well that the reader can really get into the story and feel for all the characters. It's wonderful to read a good fic as opposed to one that is poorly written with no plot. This had everything a good story needs and then some! So keep writing because you have talent and I don't want you to waste it!
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 14:50 CDT
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oh my god!!! that was beautiful!!! im so happy for ed and lilly*grabs another tissue* and wipes eyes* THANK YOU DESTINY DREAMER*hugs you*~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: edwardshot911 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that was very rude! Darth Hello Kitty is a person with no creativity, and if this person didn't like the story then why the heck did this person read it? That just ticks me off that someone would have the nerve say something that RUDE... On the good side I really like how the story is still so addicting! haha
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Reviewed By: Elysha On: September 30, 2005 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg you are an amazing writer! i have checked back everyday on this site to see if you have added more this story is so good i think it should be made into a fullmetal alchemist movie or sumthing! (u should look into that)please continue to write stories on here because i am so incredibly impressed with your work and i really hope i see more of it! you will be a famous writer one day! XOXO Elysha
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Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 10:30 CDT
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that was good.....i am sad that celine and the baby had to die but like you said it is your story.....i am also happy that lilly remembered what she had with ed......i need to know what happens next......please hurry and update as soon as you can......keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 04:43 CDT
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*reads last review posted* O.O whoa someone's cranky. dont pay any attention to 'Darth Hello Kitty' cause thats not true. i love your fic and i think that you should continue to write the way you want to because it's awsoem just the way it is. well, im still sad about celine but im happy that ed and lilly are together*contented sigh* well TTFN^.^~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: Darth Hello Kitty On: September 28, 2005 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. OW!!! The characters are HORRIBLY OOC, your spelling and grammer is AWFUL, and your Mary Sue makes me want to throw up. Please. Stop. WRITING. Or at least get yourself a beta. Sheesh.
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Reviewed By: vadkakis(again) On: September 27, 2005 14:07 CDT
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y-you didnt just do that, did you?*tears up then sobs* WWWWHHHHYYYY?*sob* ...oh well, i guess that it will be alright in the end...~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 18:29 CDT
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OMG!!! IM SO HAPPY THEY DIDNT GO THROUGH WITH IT!!!*hugs writer* but i feel sorry for celine though *cries for celine*~Vadkakid~ (make more chappies soon^.^)
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Title: I need to hear more!
Reviewed By: SwitchBlade On: September 26, 2005 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the greatest fanfics I have ever read. I belong to 3 Fullmetal Alchemist Boards and this by far is the greatest writing I have ever come across. The way you write is amazing. I hope you get out more chapters quickly I went thru to the last chapter one shot and was left on the edge of my seat when the last chapter passed please work on this next chapter quickly for my sake at least lol.
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Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 12:08 CDT
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that was good.....i hope that everything works out in the end......i need to know what happens next.....please hurry and update as soon as you can......keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 19:38 CDT
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*stops twitching and reads next chapter* O______O w-w-what?!?!?!?! but but thats not right!!*faints*~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 17:37 CDT
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*gasps and falls over twitching* this....can't...be...happening...*twitch twitch* ~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 17:59 CDT
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it is good to know that lilly is at least remembering somethings even if they are just small memories......i need to know what happens next.....please hurry and update as soon as you can.....keep up the good work.....
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Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 13:51 CDT
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that was really good.....i hope that ed can get lilly to remember everything while they are going to be in risembool......keep up the good work
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