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Reviewed By: vadkakid (laaaazy) On: September 21, 2005 11:22 CDT
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wow, things are really good now!!! im so happy!!!! i think i can forgive you for that other part now ;p ~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 05:30 CDT
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lol. i love the suspense. i cant wait to see what she chooses!!!!!~Vadkakid~(heh, i logged in for this one^.^)
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Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story just gets better the more that i read it.....i really hope that ed can finally get through to lilly.....i also hope that celine eventually tells ed that she is pregnant......keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: vadkakid(again) On: September 19, 2005 16:45 CDT
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*gasp* i hate you!!! how could you do that!!!GAH!!!... okay now that that is out of my system, i can't wait to read more!!~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: vadkakid(too lazy to log in) On: September 18, 2005 17:29 CDT
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wow, im glad that winry and al finally got together lol. i really enjoy your story and i hope to see more!!!~Vadkakid~
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Title: Awesome!!!!
Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.....the story is really good...i really hope that ed can get through to lilly and help her get her memory back......i need to know what happens next......please hury and update as soon as you can.....10/10 as always.....keep up the good work....
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Title: LOVVVVE IT
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT BIG SIS WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO LILLY AND CELINE!!! UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: chiisai tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I meant to say 'Keep those chapters coming' in my last review, but oh well... >.< poor, poor Celine...
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Reviewed By: chiisai tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful, but be careful for those missing words and how you spell things, okay? Come those chappies coming! Peace.
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Reviewed By: katrinadax [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! Please write another chapter soon!!!
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Title: *SHOCK*
Reviewed By: edwardshot911 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O no I just read the newest chapter(24), and I hope Ed dosen't die whaaaa! please hurry and update! *tear*
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Title: Hiya
Reviewed By: Daaige On: August 24, 2005 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again this isn't the end is it cause it is a great story and I still can'y believe some men oh well update soon
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Aethia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for my criticisam, I love your story, I really do, but I also have to point out that Havoc is not an alchemist. (Also refer tot he scene where he and Breda are watching the State Alchemists eat and they're talking about how they're all alchemist and talking about the pocketwatches.)
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Title: WRONG!
Reviewed By: Aethia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Envy IS NOT A MAN! I do NOT know HOW MANY TIMES I HAVE TO TELL PEOPLE! Envy is without a gender, as he/she forgot what he/she originally looked like. Read it up, people!
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Title: WRONG!
Reviewed By: Aethia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Envy IS NOT A MAN! I do NOT know HOW MANY TIMES I HAVE TO TELL PEOPLE! Envy is without a gender, as he/she forgot what he/she originally looked like. Read it up, people!
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