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Title: Awesome!!!!
Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.....the story is really good...i really hope that ed can get through to lilly and help her get her memory back......i need to know what happens next......please hury and update as soon as you can.....10/10 as always.....keep up the good work....
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Title: LOVVVVE IT
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT BIG SIS WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO LILLY AND CELINE!!! UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: chiisai tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I meant to say 'Keep those chapters coming' in my last review, but oh well... >.< poor, poor Celine...
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Reviewed By: chiisai tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful, but be careful for those missing words and how you spell things, okay? Come those chappies coming! Peace.
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Reviewed By: katrinadax [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! Please write another chapter soon!!!
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Title: *SHOCK*
Reviewed By: edwardshot911 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O no I just read the newest chapter(24), and I hope Ed dosen't die whaaaa! please hurry and update! *tear*
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Title: Hiya
Reviewed By: Daaige On: August 24, 2005 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again this isn't the end is it cause it is a great story and I still can'y believe some men oh well update soon
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Aethia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for my criticisam, I love your story, I really do, but I also have to point out that Havoc is not an alchemist. (Also refer tot he scene where he and Breda are watching the State Alchemists eat and they're talking about how they're all alchemist and talking about the pocketwatches.)
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Title: WRONG!
Reviewed By: Aethia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Envy IS NOT A MAN! I do NOT know HOW MANY TIMES I HAVE TO TELL PEOPLE! Envy is without a gender, as he/she forgot what he/she originally looked like. Read it up, people!
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Title: WRONG!
Reviewed By: Aethia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Envy IS NOT A MAN! I do NOT know HOW MANY TIMES I HAVE TO TELL PEOPLE! Envy is without a gender, as he/she forgot what he/she originally looked like. Read it up, people!
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Title: Gasp!!
Reviewed By: edwardshot911 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fan fic I have came across for FullMetal Alchemist I cant wait till you update I neeeed to know what happens next!
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Title: Ugh Men
Reviewed By: Deathismylife On: August 19, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is it with men and bragging about what goes on in bed oh well a good story I think you don't need to listen to me but Lilly should get knocked up but if not I will keep reading so update soon
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Reviewed By: Tigera On: August 19, 2005 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! PLEASE undate it soon! I don't think I can wait anylonger....*faints* It's sooo....goood
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Title: Hiya
Reviewed By: Deadtothisworld On: August 18, 2005 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya I thing you doing good at this story so update soon and plz let ed pull through
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Deadtothisworld On: August 17, 2005 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey this si getting interesting and Ed will make it right? well update as soon as you can plz
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