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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 04:43 CDT
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*reads last review posted* O.O whoa someone's cranky. dont pay any attention to 'Darth Hello Kitty' cause thats not true. i love your fic and i think that you should continue to write the way you want to because it's awsoem just the way it is. well, im still sad about celine but im happy that ed and lilly are together*contented sigh* well TTFN^.^~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: Darth Hello Kitty On: September 28, 2005 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. OW!!! The characters are HORRIBLY OOC, your spelling and grammer is AWFUL, and your Mary Sue makes me want to throw up. Please. Stop. WRITING. Or at least get yourself a beta. Sheesh.
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Reviewed By: vadkakis(again) On: September 27, 2005 14:07 CDT
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y-you didnt just do that, did you?*tears up then sobs* WWWWHHHHYYYY?*sob* ...oh well, i guess that it will be alright in the end...~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 18:29 CDT
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OMG!!! IM SO HAPPY THEY DIDNT GO THROUGH WITH IT!!!*hugs writer* but i feel sorry for celine though *cries for celine*~Vadkakid~ (make more chappies soon^.^)
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Title: I need to hear more!
Reviewed By: SwitchBlade On: September 26, 2005 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the greatest fanfics I have ever read. I belong to 3 Fullmetal Alchemist Boards and this by far is the greatest writing I have ever come across. The way you write is amazing. I hope you get out more chapters quickly I went thru to the last chapter one shot and was left on the edge of my seat when the last chapter passed please work on this next chapter quickly for my sake at least lol.
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Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 12:08 CDT
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that was good.....i hope that everything works out in the end......i need to know what happens next.....please hurry and update as soon as you can......keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 19:38 CDT
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*stops twitching and reads next chapter* O______O w-w-what?!?!?!?! but but thats not right!!*faints*~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 17:37 CDT
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*gasps and falls over twitching* this....can't...be...happening...*twitch twitch* ~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 17:59 CDT
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it is good to know that lilly is at least remembering somethings even if they are just small memories......i need to know what happens next.....please hurry and update as soon as you can.....keep up the good work.....
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Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 13:51 CDT
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that was really good.....i hope that ed can get lilly to remember everything while they are going to be in risembool......keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: vadkakid (laaaazy) On: September 21, 2005 11:22 CDT
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wow, things are really good now!!! im so happy!!!! i think i can forgive you for that other part now ;p ~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 05:30 CDT
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lol. i love the suspense. i cant wait to see what she chooses!!!!!~Vadkakid~(heh, i logged in for this one^.^)
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Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story just gets better the more that i read it.....i really hope that ed can finally get through to lilly.....i also hope that celine eventually tells ed that she is pregnant......keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: vadkakid(again) On: September 19, 2005 16:45 CDT
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*gasp* i hate you!!! how could you do that!!!GAH!!!... okay now that that is out of my system, i can't wait to read more!!~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: vadkakid(too lazy to log in) On: September 18, 2005 17:29 CDT
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wow, im glad that winry and al finally got together lol. i really enjoy your story and i hope to see more!!!~Vadkakid~
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