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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 On: October 12, 2005 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT!!!! couldn't wait to read more.Still wiping my eyes from that heart-wrenching ending. keep up the excellent work.
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 On: October 12, 2005 13:54 CDT
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this story was excellent!!!!!!please keep up the good work
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Flame Alchemist On: October 12, 2005 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this was one of the most emotional endings I have ever read. I am in my college library and had tears coming out of my eyes. The ending was amazing I love how you didn't go with the traditional happy ending and really it didn't give me closer this pair was original and I hope you make a sequel to this on how Ed tries to bring her back. I mean he spent years trying to get his mother back and he brought Lilly back once maybe he will quest for a way to bring Lilly back. I loved the story and I hung onto it's every word. Thank you for blessing this board with your amazing writing skills.
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Title: WAI!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: golden_haired_neko_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAI!!!!! *tears stream down face* Must go read sequel!!!! This one was soooo sad!!!! I just finished reading it and I'm sitting here with tears running down my face. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Can't Wait!!
Reviewed By: Soulless Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the final chapter, it was pretty good. I'm especially glad that you have decided to continue with your story and write a sequel, keep up the good work. Also please hurry and begin writing so that you don't keep your loyal fans in suspense ; ). Talk to you later bye! Alex
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Title: !!!!!^*^!!!!!
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!SIS YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!NOW I WON'T END OUT KILLING YOU!!!!!I'M DIEING OF SUSPENCE!!!!!!HURRY AND WRITE!!!!!!!!!LITTLE SISTER CAN CHARM BIG SISTER TO DO ANYTHING!!!^*^LOL
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Title: ;_;
Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made me cry. Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story kicks soooooo much ass!!!! I can't believe you killed Lilly! Oh please, for the love of all that is holy and good, write a sequel! You are such an awesome writer, I don't even care that you have typos anymore!!!!!!!! This is an awesome ending to an awesome story. *does puppy pout* Please write a sequel. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez. :(
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Title: *Cries*
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love Your Story Soo Much Sis.Thanxs For The Kind Words.I Really Am Not Going To Scream.Just Cry Tears Of Pain.Please Write A Part 2.I Encourage YOu To Do It.Your The Best friend/sister anyone could have.you've taught me soo much about writing and following my heart.i really feel like your younger sister. With All My Love Little Sis Holly
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Title: wow^.^
Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg somethings wrong with my comp cause it wouldnt let me write any reviews for mediaminer>.< but hopefully this one goes through cause i havent written a review for here in a long time. first of all, i would like to say that this is the best fanfiction that i have ever read for fullmetal alchemist, and im sad to see that it's ending. i cried when she died and im still teary now*i love riza T.T* I hope everything goes well for ed and lilly and rika(im on the edge of my seat cause of thhe suspense) Also, im starting an Envy rebelous club, and so far its only me lol *holds up banners of a badly drawn envy's face and an 'X' drawn over his face*Oh, yes, i can't wait to see your new anime story. plus, i think you should also make a sequel*even though the story's not done yet lol*. i know that any other stories that you will write will be just as kick butt as this one and i can't wait to read them. well, i have to go now, so TTFN and keep up the awsome writing^.^~Vadkakid~
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Title: Love It!
Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is soooooooooo good! I love it! Lilly and little Rika, are some of the coolest OCs I've ever seen! One last thing though, I'm not trying to flame you, but there are a lot of words that need to be spell checked, so please take care of that as soon as you can. Misspellings can make reading a lot less fun. But, still, this is a kickass story, I'm so anxious to hear the rest! See ya next review! Oh, and some other things, 1st, pleeeeease check out my story, InuJizen To Sara, and 2nd, Darth Hello Kitty,..... You suck. If you don't like someone's story, the DON'T READ IT!!! Oh and, how can Lilly be a Mary Sue if so many people like her? A Mary Sue is a female fanfiction character that has other worldly powers, is really just there to make the other characters antsy, and a OC that only the author likes. Get your facts straight before you say such mean things to someone who is only trying their best to write a good story. Sorry, but I just had to let that out. Ja Ne! ~HanyouAlchemist~
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 22:26 CDT
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Okay, I've been following this story for awhile and I must say this is one of the most best and planned out stories I've ever read. You made Lilly a likable character and I even approve of the Ed/Lilly pairing a lot. Lilly's been through so much and she's now one of my favorite OCs that I've read about. I'm not going to pick at your spelling errors(even though there are a few...BUT WHO CARES? THIS FIC ROCKS!) because it's hardly noticable because you write so well that the reader can really get into the story and feel for all the characters. It's wonderful to read a good fic as opposed to one that is poorly written with no plot. This had everything a good story needs and then some! So keep writing because you have talent and I don't want you to waste it!
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 14:50 CDT
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oh my god!!! that was beautiful!!! im so happy for ed and lilly*grabs another tissue* and wipes eyes* THANK YOU DESTINY DREAMER*hugs you*~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: edwardshot911 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that was very rude! Darth Hello Kitty is a person with no creativity, and if this person didn't like the story then why the heck did this person read it? That just ticks me off that someone would have the nerve say something that RUDE... On the good side I really like how the story is still so addicting! haha
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Reviewed By: Elysha On: September 30, 2005 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg you are an amazing writer! i have checked back everyday on this site to see if you have added more this story is so good i think it should be made into a fullmetal alchemist movie or sumthing! (u should look into that)please continue to write stories on here because i am so incredibly impressed with your work and i really hope i see more of it! you will be a famous writer one day! XOXO Elysha
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Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 10:30 CDT
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that was good.....i am sad that celine and the baby had to die but like you said it is your story.....i am also happy that lilly remembered what she had with ed......i need to know what happens next......please hurry and update as soon as you can......keep up the good work
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