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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 22:15 CST
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This is such a moving and intense chapter that I hardly know where to begin to review! It's outstanding writing and unbelievably touching creativity. I love that we're getting closer and closer to the identity of the driving evil behind this hideous act! Thank you so much for sharing this with us, love!
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 14:35 CST
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I would think that the lost daughters would want the mothers who wept for them and loved them and wanted them, rather than men since it was men who killed them. but i suppose it makes sense your way, since the mothers couldn't protect them or prevent their abandonment and murder. aaagh, all the evidence of the nearly complete eradication of the sacred feminine is so heartbreaking. da vinci code! da vinci code! :)
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Reviewed By: KD nsi On: February 23, 2006 23:18 CST
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Higher than a kite? Oh, THAT should be fun! Nice love that Schu loves him and didn't know there was more there than 'bastard king of demons.' which phrase, I love. It was worth the pain, love, and the ones out of the blue are often the best.
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Reviewed By: mm-c On: February 23, 2006 21:51 CST
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one has to wonder what Crawford's going to be like when that power decides to leave him...hmmm wow i'm impressed by the addition of the daughters and crawford's role...
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oooh i like aya being super duper protective of yohji...and he's a were of the canine persuasion hmmm or was it lupine darn memory's screwed. Were-wolf sounds too mundane though...and of course you had to give me an intriguing ending! Good luck with the moving
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 23:34 CST
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A few changes from the last time I saw it. Clearer, but I really don't think the dialogue sounded padded. It's a relief to know that Aya is okay. "Because he's dying," isn't my favorite thing to read in a fic! It'll be fun to see what else he's capable of in his new form! Always looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: red queen On: February 17, 2006 23:18 CST
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aya's a werewolf? that's unexpected. at least he's one of the special people now. :) maybe he'll get a little more respect. i hope so. nice work.
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Reviewed By: KD nsi On: February 17, 2006 20:26 CST
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Don't worry about the dialogue, it's fine. I wanna pet Aya's ears! (i wanna pet ALL of Aya...) *ahem* Thanks for another great chapter. I love this story, do I say that every time?
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Reviewed By: mm-c On: February 14, 2006 22:16 CST
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have you ever played Kingdom Hearts...your assassin sprites I picture to be the Heartless. Did i mention recently that Aya and Yohji haven't had a starring role in a while...and were no show in this chapter?
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 20:50 CST
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I wanna be an evil bitch goddess from hell, too! And I want Blaze's fabulous wings! Really love the display ob Blaze's power. Always anxious for more!
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Reviewed By: KD nsi On: February 14, 2006 18:54 CST
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hee hee, gotta love Watari. And poor Crawford, getting glared at by Tatsumi! Eek! As usual, deman ing more ASAP, please!!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 19:48 CST
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more! more! more!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 18:45 CST
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Mayhe, hysteria, and good old-fashioned ass kicking! This is my kind of fun! Another fabulous chapter, darling!
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Reviewed By: KD nsi On: February 08, 2006 18:34 CST
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okay, forget the dumb packing and all, I command you to do nothing but write until this is finished, doggone it!! Please????
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 21:47 CST
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what's with aya?? (better him than yohji though) and after all this climatic build up you'd better update soon :P
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