| "Red Shaman" Reviews/Comments [ 260 ] |
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 07:53 CDT
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sooo does that mean aya and yohji next chapter????
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Reviewed By: BlueFolly10 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 13:28 CDT
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You know, I've always been of the opinion that Schuldig needs to be consistently doused with very cold water, but what you've done is just so much more effective. Quite an enjoyable read! Cheers.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 23:20 CDT
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hehe schu gets put in his place!
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Title: the things i do for u...
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 15:14 CDT
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(i signed in) lol...okay first off thanks for explaining......now you can get back to your complicated plot that i'm sure is dancing around in your head and itching to get out...(but don't forget to include more about my fave couple)
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 19:35 CDT
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ok what's the deal with farf? you can't leave ppl with unexplained things it drives them up a wall, sends them crazy (even crazier than farf). How does he remember, how on earth did star convince yotan and ayan? and farf and ken? how did farf remember....u better update soon with some answers *sound of a whip cracking*
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 20:33 CDT
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Moimoi-chan, would I cover Yohji and Aya in caramel for anyone but you? (Other than for my own evil self gratification, that is)
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 17:54 CDT
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soooo...was that for me?
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 22:48 CDT
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no yotan? :( but I'm still reading in the hopes of a yotan with whip cream...
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 17:38 CDT
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okay so i've tried to do this three days in a row and it didn't work so my review has been edited down to 'i love the farf and schu conversation about tatsumi' (and i dont even normally like farf)
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 14:54 CDT
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so i tried this a few times yesterday and it didnt go through (simply b/c MM.org hates me)...so let's try again.....what's the significance of the tattoo??hurry up and get to it (pls) :P...hmm this is my third time for the day trying to get MM.org to accept my review
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Title: now that's just mean...
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 09:28 CDT
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...you put aya and yohji together with whip cream and jello...what are you trying to do to me???
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 22:48 CDT
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haha i see you fell into the same trap as me...the neverending story....keep writing i like reading...i'd like to see more unfolding of the plot...
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 22:15 CDT
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i like this story....i like the tie in with yami no matsuei, but that it doesn't over-ride the focus of the story...and that u give background on the red shaman team...
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 18:07 CDT
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Oh, more chapters! Cool! I want to say I'm enjoying this, it's very original and I want to see where you're going. But I'm still getting confused. I'm trying and failing to get all the characters straight in my head. I don't know what to tell you to fix that, though. Just wanted to point it out, constructive criticism is good, right?
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Title: Hmmm...
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 20:21 CDT
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I enjoyed reading this, but I'm lost. Who is Lady, and the others? You do have a nice writing style, smooth and easy to read. I say keep writing! (since you asked.)
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