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 Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 02, 2005 22:10 CST
Comment/Review:
*blush*... darn you i stopped writing Appeal which I vowed to get up tonight to read this fic, thanks to your email...MM.org hasn't even bothered to show me it was updated, or sent me an email to let me know either.hmph. what (wrong word here) species is blaze? is it goddess and that's why she and her kind are hard to kill? what's with the triplets? when are you going to let me know?
 Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 30, 2005 21:51 CST
Comment/Review:
sooo I wasn't one of those kids who shoved things up their noses, so I can't relate there and I'm half torn b/w what the hell were you thinking brad and ooh cute as long it isn't my kid and I have to pull it out. Also I'm going to guess his powers hadn't come into play then b/c i think knowing the consequences brad wouldn't have done that, but aya what was aya thinking????? a fish???
 Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 27, 2005 16:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know I only torture you because I love you. Hehehe.
 Reviewed By: mm-chan  On: October 27, 2005 16:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I don't think it's a matter of writing smut properly b/c you were doing a great job....i think it's a matter of evilness, and torturing poor innocent ole moi
 Title: moimoi-chan
Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 27, 2005 12:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why, yes, darling. Surely you know by now that I am evil. It's why Schu and Farf love me. I TOLD you I couldn't write smut properly.
 Reviewed By: mm-chan  On: October 27, 2005 12:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
so you got my blood all pumped up and then you make aya blow it????
 Title: sad and sweet
Reviewed By: mm-chan  On: October 26, 2005 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ok so they are not my fave couple, (my second fave though), so i can still enjoy the thorough streak of sentimentality running through the chapter, i am however completely ignoring the hint that schu is going to die or at least get seriously injured and maimed cuz i know you won't do that to him right? right? right!?!
 Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 24, 2005 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
now that's just mean, nothing advanced! i deserve another update soon *snicker*
 Reviewed By: mm-chan  On: October 22, 2005 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
:) I wasn't even goin to bother you this time (lol). I was surprised you humoured me as much as you had when I kept pestering you to go into details about their relationship and sidetracked you from the plot (*snicker* evil plan worked... for a little while). although i can't even comment about the plot because it's still developing :P so i'll just sit back and wait for the next update which i know will be soon...*stands in background with evil pointy thing*
 Reviewed By: BlueFolly10 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 18, 2005 21:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I generally like to think of myself as far too mature to squeal in delight when things go the way I want them to, but I very nearly made myself a liar after reading this chapter. And consequently, the phrase "the pants" is quite possibly the best justification for waking up in someone else's bed that I've ever heard. Nicely done!
 Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 18, 2005 21:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
ugh ugh ugh you really need to take off that only MM.org members' reviews allowed thingy thing...I had to sign in (oh the horror!)...I'm not mad at you anymore for aya and yohji though :) hopefully. since aya is still asleep....haha I used to do that ask questions thing when asleep to my dad, i'd ask him where his wallet was and if i could have money :) yay! you brought in tsuzuki and hisoka!!! i was wondering if you would.....btw you must be mad a thesis for my bachelors was hard enough, a thesis for a pHD never will happen (I just realised I spend too much time in the chem lab as PhD came out as pH D)...anyway I'm still harassing for an update even though you just updated, simply b/c you said you were practically finished with your thesis...give a man an inch and he'll take a yard
 Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2005 15:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
aarrrrggghhh i think you do this deliberately, leave me with no resolution between aya and yohji *pouts*
 Title: chapter 22
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 12, 2005 07:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
so star and schu are still torturing brad and sunny *hehe evil grin*...on a completely different note....you'd better show me more aya yohji in the next chapter b/c now I'm addicted and you may get some whip lash *cracks whip*
 Title: chapter 21
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 12, 2005 07:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
ugh i missed a chapter!!!!!!!and it had aya in it too!!! and he was angsting about yohji!!!! how the hell did that one happen (me missing it not aya angsting about yohji)???
 Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 09, 2005 13:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
darn it I had this whole rant thing going in my head for you when i first read the chapter and realised it started with Schu and not Yotan. Then I got caught up in the Schu story and was laughing at Brad and Sunny that I forgot my rant. Then i realised you did give me some yotan aya interaction so i couldnt very well be mad could i, but that left me realising I had no rant (but a very long review at least for me)
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