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Title: chapter 12
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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"Mein Gott! He's Brad on steroids!" "With PMS," Farf said grinning. "And better taste in clothes." "Hell of a lot scarier," Farf added. "Definitely hotter." Cackling with glee, and it's not 'cause I'm high on painkillers, either!
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Title: chapter nine
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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"deep seated need to see Abyssinian and Balinese together in handcuffs with jell-o and whipped cream" oddly enough, I now have exactly that deap-seated need myself.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Okay, so last review must've been for chapter 7. Oops. Anyway--eeheehee! Aya flattened in record time, but that wouldn't be a record for Yohji. *snicker* "I like men not boys." ooh...
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 14:10 CST
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The list helps. Oh, loved the way you handled Schwarz, loved, loved, and while I'm usually very nice to Schu, (smart me), loved the way Blaze handled him especially...hee hee, Nagi's got a girlfriend, Nagi's got a girlfriend!
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Title: Chapter Five
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 21:21 CST
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Chapter Five, and I'm going to work on Chaos before mm-chan gets back from her movie and starts hunting me. But I love this: "Damn it, Farf! Would you kill us all in our sleep if she asked you to?" "Who says I'd need you to be asleep? Can I have a character list? Which one is Honey, Watari or Tatsumi (sp)? And Sei is the other one? I don't know WHY I have so much trouble, clearly no one else is, so it's me, not your story...
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Reviewed By: BlueFolly10 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 22:35 CST
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I have such a hard time writing dialogue for Aya, but you pull it off quite nicely. That slightly incoherent ramble he's got going on fits so very well. Every time I try to put words in his mouth, he sort of winds up sounding psychotic. Or pissy. And sometimes a combination of both. Oh well. Lovely work as always.
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Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 17:17 CST
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"Of all the ridiculous, idiotic notions . . ." "There you are." Just...precious!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 17:08 CST
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*in love*
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 21:15 CST
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that's evil btw evil. What's with the short chapter and not letting me know what's going on and I know you. You wont give me any more Aya Yohji for another few chapters. You'll tell me you have to get on with the plot but that's not fair you didn't tell me anything. and i know you expected this rant from me, in fact you are probably grinning gleefully as i type but i repeat that's not fair!
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: November 09, 2005 17:15 CST
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no!!!!!!! (that's an exclamation of disappointment)
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 09:32 CST
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You may have to wait a couple of days moimoi-chan. The computer ate the next chapter. Stupid machine.
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: November 09, 2005 07:19 CST
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haha that's the first i'm holding out for the second being up today :)
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Title: u do realise...
Reviewed By: mm-chan On: November 07, 2005 07:14 CST
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that you owe me an aya x yohji chapter and/ or brad x schu? i've been good :)
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: November 06, 2005 09:37 CST
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that was too short *hmph*
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Reviewed By: BlueFolly10 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 02:08 CST
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You have such a beautiful sense of myth and legend. Being a fan of history myself, I'm so thrilled to be able to read a story that incorporates so much of myth and legend in such a nicely put-together fashion. Even though there's a lot of ground being covered, nothing seems haphazard. You just get the feeling that everyone involved simply has A LOT of history. Which is quite impressive. And by the by, I promise I haven't abandoned Tarantella. I'm just a woefully slow writer. I'm also extremely critical of my own work, so I wind up deleting more than I probably should. Maybe I just need someone to constantly pester me. Or poke me with a sharp stick when I get too critical. Regardless, I hope to have something more up soon. And again, lovely work as always. Cheers!
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