| "Red Shaman" Reviews/Comments [ 260 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 19:32 CST
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Oooh! I can't wait to see Nagi, Omi, and Ghost in action with their new powers! Looking forward to the next exciting installment! Love it, as always.
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Title: nag, nag, nag
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 19:08 CST
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So I'm wandering the kitchen, hoping foolishly for something I can eat without using my mouth (yeah, you know how that went, right?) and the munchkin's cartoon suddenly ends up in Valhalla. Which reminded me to nag you--need more!!!! Now, please!
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 17:16 CST
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so, i've finally red the story that everyone's talking about. and it's really fascinating, the whole mix of magick and mythologies. and threesomes! woohoo! there's a lot more heterosexuality in this than in most of the fanfics i read, but it works because the female characters are so strong, and not simpering little figures of wretched fangirlness. are all the members of red shaman OC's? i'm figuring that they are, and that their personalities have been fleshed out very well by you. and the farf! the superhuman, superpowered farf!!! oooo, i love it! even before he regained his 'jeirn' powers he was really spifftastic. i love 'im so... i do have one minor thing, which i probably shouldn't mention, since you apparently have an editor who would have pointed this out to you -- sometimes you have a complete sentence, followed by a sentence fragment, where a compound sentence would flow better. it just makes the reading a little choppy. but you don't do it all that often. oh, one other thing -- dang it, you made me cry with that last chapter! the RedQueen does not cry! ever! okay, so that's an enormous lie. but still! anyway, i'm glad you update so frequently as i'm looking forward to seeing what will happen to the schu-beast. i'm really enjoying it! it's good work, this fic! love, redqueen
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Title: not a happy camper...
Reviewed By: mm-c On: November 21, 2005 23:08 CST
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...and you know why!...good chapter though, but depressing
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Title: Blythe
Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 13:52 CST
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OK, so I'm a little depressed and the latest chapter made me cry, not an easy feat, I assure you. Very moving, always anxious to read more!
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Title: Then I'll Review Again!!
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 21:48 CST
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"I would have done anything to hear you say you loved me. Just once. Of your own free will. Without any prodding or coercion." I have to tell you, phx, this is perfect. Freedom means so much to Schu, anything brad said under any coercion would be worse than meaningless. And that last exchange, asking to spend the rest of his life with Skye since "no one else seems interested"? *sniff*sniff*BAWL!!*
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 09:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful, Phoenix. Just beautiful.
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Reviewed By: mm-chibi On: November 17, 2005 23:11 CST
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hmm i don't like this other ppl reviewing before i do thing...but yay! you updated and you have yet another person hounding you for more...although since we dont see eye to eye on certain things *cough yotan cough* this may be a bit problematic
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Reviewed By: BlueFolly10 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 22:29 CST
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Hooray for dialects and psuedo-voodoo! For a yankee, I have an incredible fascination with anything antebellum, and you've satisfied my secret little addiction quite nicely. Can't wait to see where all of this goes, though I have my theories. Thanks again for all of the lovely work!
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Title: Caught Up!!!!
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Now I can join in the hounding. MORE!!! and btw--nice foreshadowing. (ooh, i remember high school literature terms!)
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 22:04 CST
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"Starting with when you got the cocoa puff stuck up your nose when you were four." "telling Aya-chan about who had eaten her pet goldfish on a dare." Oh gods, you're good.
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Title: chapter 27
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 21:57 CST
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oh my schu-schu *snuggles worriedly but reads on*
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Title: chapter 24
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 21:46 CST
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awww...Aya snuggled up to Yohji and answering in his sleep...adorable!
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Title: chapter 23
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 21:42 CST
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ooh, Bradley is jealous...
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Title: chapter 18
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 21:18 CST
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Go, Schu! Be the chaotic bastard we know and love...
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