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Title: #95
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 16:56 CST
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okay so its really good that you updated i was expecting a dearth (sp?) of fanfics over the break...the suspense is killing me so i suggest you update soon, very soon *tries to look threatening and fails, horribly*
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Reviewed By: BlueFolly10 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 01:30 CST
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Must not crack jokes about Aya's "sword." Must not crack jokes about Aya's "sword." Must not... Oh hell, I can't resist. I'm going to snicker for days about Aya's "katana" poking Yohji over and over again. Are we sure it was really the weapon?
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 21:18 CST
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*is suddenly brain-dead* umm...have I mentioned how I love the way you keep the suspense going? Really. Like it. Not going crazy, like it. Yeah... Also, you do an awesome job of keeping all your characters distinct. You never wander into the wrong voice, and that's not easy to maintain with so many characters running around.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 20:59 CST
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Oh! Thank you, thank you, thank you! Yes, this is a sanity saver. Blessings on you! I love these bite size chapters that keep me begging for more. I can't believe Aya is insulting Yohji's dance skills! How rude! I'm so curious about Ghost's discovery and can't wait to see the trio use their powers! Thanks again, it's wonderful. Can't wait for more! (Wow! The spam code is XACT. Weird, huh?)
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Reviewed By: RED QUEEN On: December 23, 2005 18:24 CST
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these chickies have some freaky-cool powers. it'll be interesting to see what crops up in the big showdown. i am quite curious to know what will happen to schuldig now, as i'm sure everyone else is, and to know what parts they will all play in the coming chapters. and to know how pissed blaze will be when she catches her husbands lurking about. :) so, hey! ho! let's go! as the ramones were once wont to say. love, redqueen (sorry if this is a crappy review, i'm a little worn out)
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Reviewed By: mm--chan On: December 20, 2005 23:00 CST
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i know this is your review DV but KD it doesn't count unless i have computer access whenever i want! that being said (sorry dv couldnt resist)...i was a bit dismayed by the lack of yohji in this chapter but that's okay *sniff* next chapter for sure right right? okay so i know im not the only person to pick up on this..but aya's a sensitive or is he actually a latent talent? and dontcha know that yohji's the one who's supposed to be special?
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 22:01 CST
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Oh, Phoenix! Your mind is amazing. I don't know how you do it, but I hope you don't stop. I'm very excited to see what happens at the party. And, was that a hint to Aya being somehow sensitive or attune to powers? Interesting... Nicely done, darling. I love it!
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Title: beat ya, chibi
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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And I read it, too. Beautiful, Phoenix, I love that you've got the innocent grown-ups mixed in too, not only children can be helpless in the face of evil. I love, love, love, the friendship between Schu and Skye, even the teeny bit you show here. I wonder why Aya was the one who reacted to the note. And I want MORE!!!!!!
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Title: i'm a heel
Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 22:39 CST
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I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner! I love the visuals in this chapter. You're so descriptive that I have a beautiful mental picture of how everyone looks in their party clothes in the past two chapters. As always, I want...more, more, more!
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: December 17, 2005 00:30 CST
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okay i have no idea what was the last chapter i reviewed and so....um they were all great except too short?
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 18:20 CST
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This is just too good!! *screams in frustration* I can't stand it, I can't stand it!! Please, please, can we have a long chapter and get stuff done, it's killing me, I HAVE to read this! I SWEAR if I don't get some satisfaction I'm gonna end all my fics right now with a huge asteroid striking the earth!!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 23:21 CST
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Absolutely lovely as always. The descriptions are so vivid that I feel like I'm in the room! Bonus points for use of "Killer Queen"! So looking forward to the party!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 23:20 CST
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Gee. Poor Brad, trying not to leer at Schu. Idiot. Schu loves being leered at! Wonderful as always, can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: red queen On: December 09, 2005 00:02 CST
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lurvely! *dreamy sigh* i love star...such a badass babe...but i'm jealous that she gets to boink farfarello on a regular basis. ken too, actually. but she's so coool! she needs her own comic book. great chapter, as usual; i didn't mind the jumping around. your characters are so much fun, OC's and series characters both. i just have one little nitpick-- "He had been a detective before joining Weiss so he had quickly surmised that he hadn't been gone all that long." er...why would one have to be a detective to figure that out? was that meant facetiously? and why am i the only one that ever nitpicks or points stuff out? i feel like the wicked witch of the southeast... --love, redqueen
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Reviewed By: BlueFolly10 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 00:26 CST
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Oh how well I know the scary implementation of a Southern Drawl... Backing away slowly really is the best and only defense. And consequently, I so need a shirt like that. One that I could make menacing reference to at work most preferably. In any case, lovely work as ever. Cheers!
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