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Reviewed By: Fire Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 04:14 CDT
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Truly a gorgeous fic, it was both very real and very touching- a lot of emotions there, but it wasn't over-dramatic. The Jin/Fuu pairing is awesome, I love how you kept them in character too. Wonderful work, I loved it!
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Reviewed By: Steel Butterfly On: April 22, 2006 00:36 CDT
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OhmyGOD!! I laughed, I hurt, I was shocked, definitely cried. I just loved it!!!! It kept in touch with their personalities but it still expanded them (nobody is the same as they were even the day before). I figured she'd make it thru the birth. However, when Jin made it back, for some reason I thought Mugen might have been with Fuu until Jin made it back. I'm glad Mugen does make an appearance and stays in Jin's life. It was excellent! It was so sad but it was just amazing. I love the stories that crack Jin open. Keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: NINJA OF THE NIGHT On: April 15, 2006 00:35 CDT
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P.S. Anyone tries to flame you, just lemme know. I got friends in high places, and I'm not afraid to use the phone book. *^^*
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Title: Jyoozu desu yo!
Reviewed By: NINJA OF THE NIGHT On: April 15, 2006 00:31 CDT
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Yo, Youkai! XD, your work is amazing! I love it more than anything in the world. Even anime itself! *gasp* And I really loved this story...it's so lush and romantic, and...yes, I cried. Don't tell anyone. LOL This story really touched me. Really, really wrapped up the series for me, SINCE THEY LEFT IT HANGING. So I'd like to thank you for making such a timeless fanfic, and that I look forward to any other doujinshi that you write. Ja mata!
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Reviewed By: Arella [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 02:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful. It was like a song that you know will end, but you keep hoping the musician will continue to play forever. There aren't words to describe how much this story touched me. Thank you so much.
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Reviewed By: StormyKate On: March 19, 2006 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story! It made me really sad but I suppose it was refreshing NOT to see a happy ending for once! -Kate
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Reviewed By: Kelly_D On: March 19, 2006 04:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't like when you switched to present tense sometimes, like "the samurai thinks" and stuff. Snapped me out of what I was reading and distracted me a bit. BUT! omg, so sweet... I LOVE the Jin/Fuu pairing, I was so hoping they'd get together by the end of the series, but NOOO... Thanks for writing a story about them, even if you DID have to go and make it sad. *pout*
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Title: That was such a good story!!
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really good fan fiction! It was so sad at the end too! A while ago I started reading it when you only had 9 chapters up, then I didn't read it for a month or two, and then I read the epolouge!! Like I said its a really good fan fiction!! In truth though, I can't watch samourai champloo in the same way anymore! But I have ONE tiny little complaint that you don't have to read. The scene between Jin, and Satoru (did I spell that right?) where he calls Jin Shishou... Lets just say I am a Fruits Basket fan... xD Satoru reminds me of Hiro, more than Mugen... xD Like I said you can ignore this... I'm overly critical about things like this, it went with the story well. The rating of originality/creativity is actually a 9.5/10
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Reviewed By: Odi et Amo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was beautifully written. I cried almost every chapter, which is good. Sad stories are rarer than happy endings, and it's really refreshing to see someone write something like this. I love that you made it a Jin/Fuu pairing, so many people have Mugen/Fuu stories. I really enjoyed this, so much.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 11:21 CST
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As I sit here drying my eyes from the emotion that you've brought out of me only by words. There is nothing I can say that can compliment how excellent this story was. every words seems so properly placed and they seemed to make this story literlaty come to life as I watch a movie play infront of me with only words. The ending was bitter sweet but it couldn't have been better. This is the first one of your stories that I have read and you have gotten me hooked. You are an excellent writer and I would LOVE to read anything that you have written on or off the internet if given the chance. Good luck and make sure that you don't let such of gift with words go to waste. There are plenty of good writers but I find that It's difficult to find a writer that brings your emotion into the story so it feels as if you are actualy there. Take care PEACE!
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Reviewed By: rena nyte On: March 04, 2006 07:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much. I always hoped you'd have some miracle ending where she'd live but oh well. I cried when I was reading the end. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Empress Night Star On: March 01, 2006 20:13 CST
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Just read your fic to the end. The ending really did make me cry. That's the second fic that I've read that's happened to. I did like that you kept it realistic. So all in all it was a good fic. If you get the chance read my fics that are posted here. My pen name is Midnight Star. No I have no Samuri Champloo fics.
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Reviewed By: Mistress_Lune On: February 25, 2006 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This story was truely amazing. Of course, I always prefer a completely happy ending, this wasn't entirely sad, so I can deal with it ;p. Seriously, its been awhile since I've found a fic that I've enjoyed this much. I would love to see this continued with a sequel (or two ^^) It would be really neet to see thier daughter groing older (getting into some scrapes like her mother) Well, I just had to let you know how much I loved the story and hope you continue to write fics of this calibur in the future. r in�
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Title: Sweet Nothings
Reviewed By: harualea On: February 25, 2006 02:16 CST
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Wow! I loved your story. I like your art and all of your stories. This story, Sweet Nothings, was wonderful. I even cried. I am a huge fan of Samurai Champloo (my very FAVORITE scene is when Jin is trying to fish..just makes me laugh, poor guy), too, and, now that I think about it, the Jin/Fuu pairing kind of fits better than a Mugen/Fuu pairing. It could go either way. Your story was very enjoyable to read. I was pulled in at the very beginning, and the ending made me cry. Not joking. I loved it, thank you for writing it and posting it so it could be read. I wondered throuhout the whole story "will Fuu be magically healed?" but that wouldn't have worked, huh? Life isn't like that. You are a truly amazing artist and author and I look forward to reading whatever else you decide to write. Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: *Sesshie's* Nina On: February 23, 2006 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you have written a masterpiece. Well done. Now, how about you start up on your other fics that you have yet to finish *coughLoveLife&BlessedCursecough* But yeah, you are an excellent writer, and don't let anyone tell you other wise. It ruins the creative muses.....it sucks. Anyway, got a myspace? Shall I try and find you? XD Keep up the awesome work. I shall forever praise you as one of my favorite artists and writers. You are an inspiration really. Your changing styles keep me on my toes, and the awesome artwork always keeps me striving to become better...come to think of it, I haven't done anything in a while. *sigh* Back to work....-_-*
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