| "Sweet Nothings" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Title: Well done ( Sorry about the dupe!)
Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: February 18, 2006 03:08 CST
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I'm a strict Mu/Fuu-ist, so for me to even look at the first page of this fic was a minor victory to your alluring tag. Needless to say, I'm so glad that I did. Your story was touching and realistic and very well written. I still can't get wholeheartedly behind this pairing, but you went a long way towards reconciling me to the notion! Good writing has a tendency to do that. I also like your A/N. I do enjoy it when the authors take a minute to share their thoughts about their writing. Thanks for sharing your creativity with the world! Merci!
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Title: Well done
Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: February 18, 2006 03:05 CST
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I'm a strict Mu/Fuu-ist, so for me to even look at the first page of this fic was a minor victory to your alluring tag. Needless to say, I'm so glad that I did. Your story was touching and realistic and very well written. I still can't get wholeheartedly behind this pairing, but you went a long way towards reconciling me to the notion! Good writing has a tendency to do that. I also like your A/N. I do enjoy it when the authors take a minute to share their thoughts about their writing. Thanks for sharing your creativity with the world! Merci!
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Title: ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL
Reviewed By: Saeka-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 23:07 CST
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A perfect ending to a perfect fanfic. Yes, I did notice at first that "Himawari" meant sunflower. That had me smiling for a good five minutes. I LOVE how you made Mugen an uncle to Himawari. So CUTE! And Jin makes the best daddy ever. You are amazing, so keep up the good work! ~Saeka-sama
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Reviewed By: bluedaydreamer678 (notloggedin) On: February 10, 2006 12:27 CST
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*sniffles* that was beautiful! I almost cried it was so good! I love Himawari, she is tooo cute and Jin makes such a good daddy, I could so see him in that role, and Mugen too, oh it was precious!! Please keep writing, your magnificent!!!! YOu totally rock!!
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Reviewed By: unj On: February 10, 2006 05:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this so much. it had me crying at the end; it was so intense and beautiful. somehow, i could see the end coming but it still didn't detract, rather added to the intensity of the story. there's no such thing as a happily ever after, but at least they had a chance to experience what it would have been like. if you do more, i will definitely be coming back.
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Reviewed By: Silverwings16 On: February 08, 2006 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm one of your lurkers and I thought it was finally time to review. Your fic was incredible and the ending made me cry. Your writing style is great and you kept the character's personalites very true to the show. I can't wait to read more of your Jin/Fuu stories in the future!
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Title: T^T
Reviewed By: eViL kAgOmE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! that was the most beautiful thing ever!! I cried my little eyes outT^T..... I didnt think she was gonna die at birth i thought she was gonna die like two yrs later. But you did deh bestess job. I just wanted to congragulate you for writing a great story :claps: it was absolutley awesome. lol well keep on writing and if you write anymore fanfics tell me! ill read them all!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: 108 princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 23:33 CST
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You are a great authoress, I have enjoyed every story you have written. And I do love writing stories as well , but writers block. Anyway, it's amazing how you can capture the character's view and show it through your story. Your one of the best! @ @ 0
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Reviewed By: DeJaVooo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made me cry again. I am glad that you didn't make it very tragic, becasue then it would lose its beauty. But this is a very good work! You surely know how to write and bring out different emotions. =)Its just beautiful and sweet, i really hope that you write more fan fics i would read them all! Thank you again for posting this here, and speding your time to write and update, some of us (i hope many) really appriciate it!
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Reviewed By: InusGirlD [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 11:18 CST
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I was reading some of the reviews at the top and am glad that I wasn't the only one crying at the end. I actually had to stop reading for a while because my mom was in the room and I think she would've looked at me funny if I started crying while just looking at the computer :P Please do write another fanfiction! I've enjoyed all your others (and this one too!)
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: February 05, 2006 01:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have loved reading this story it was such and utter joy to read. sad but great. From the 'you can give her one of our flowers', I started crying and I still am. I loved this story and hope to read more of your writing. I also loved how mugen came back, I thought you might have him come back, just cause I can't see him just walking away and never coming back when Fuu is dieing. I also like how he acts so nice to their daughter, cause even in the show I get that feeling that he would be nice to a kid. Well once again it was a great story, I've finally stopped crying. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: TheRP [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 22:12 CST
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I must say that the ending was somewhat shorter than I expected, but fabulous none the less. I quite enjoyed the last chapter. I really liked that you brought Mugen back into the story. Well I hope that another Champloo fic will be in the works soon. Happy writings. ^_^
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 20:52 CST
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Lurker here...actually, i think i reviewed waay back in the beginning. But anyway, i just wanted to thank you for this wonderful story. God, i'm still crying. This is only the second story to make me do that. While i'm not exactly happy fuu died, i really don't think you could have written a better ending. I'm glad you didn't kill her off as a result of childbirth. That...would have sucked. Anyway, i honestly can't think of anything i would have changed, plot-wise, in this fic. It was beautifully written, with completely believable characters that were amazingly easy to empathize with. This is, by far, the best samurai champloo fic i've read. No exaggerating. I look forward to the next one.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: February 04, 2006 20:34 CST
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Kami that was beautiful. So endearing and heart-wrenching at the same time. Simply brilliant my dear, absolutely brilliant.
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Title: A river of tears
Reviewed By: PhantomDark [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know you've written something great when people start crying, and get emotionally involved in the story. i must say as a huge fan of your stories and art that i truely envy your talent. whati mean is the way you weave your words and pull the reader into some little world revolveing solely around your use of words. keep up the good work (good just dosent seem like the best word but if i said fantastic would you get mad?) do take care Youkai Yume. i just cant wait to read the next and final chapter.
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