| "A new beginning, a new hope" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh, how devastating! what a difficult situation. because i am a mother, i understand the determination rin has to save her child. the baby is a part of her, but also it's own self at the same time. sesshoumaru is youkai, and it is doubtful that he would feel the same emotions as she does, in that regard. he loves her and cannot live without her. to him, that is all. end of story. man, so much drama and heartache. i can understand the long wait for the update. you would have to be in a certain kind of mood to post that sort of content. *tears up* i am beyond excited over the next chap...even if it makes me bawl. : ( you are the sh*t!!
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Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 10:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you ever get my email on "Why you started writing??" Cuz I never got a reply. Email me and we discuss things there. Now to the story...i dunno I have a feeling I'm going to cry alot in the next few chapters. It doesnt look like a happy ending :( Poor baby! Poor Rin! Selfish Sesshy!
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Reviewed By: ladyrinremix(nsi) On: December 08, 2005 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO just cuz I asked didn't mean i wanted it to end so soon. Keep writing. Four chaps might not be enough for your rabid fans :) like myself.
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Title: To Have the Cake or Eat It (part 2)
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya there: I am glad to hear about you getting to practice more and the selling of your viola. I thought this chapter to be very compelling and I loved the twist on Rin and Sess's baby. This story is very fresh and written so well. The last line had me gasping and thinking about what will happen next to Rin. You make the characters seem so real and they just come to life with your writing. Thank you for the update and take care of you. Your fan, Christal
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Reviewed By: animegirl007(not logged in) On: December 07, 2005 21:24 CST
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How can you do that???? I love the idea of them having a pure blood youkai pup but, not if Rin has to die....NO!!!!!!! Please let them be a happy family..Sessy, Riny and baby....update soon
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Reviewed By: SweetyPieRin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! ^ _ ^ ~*~SweetyPieRin~*~
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: December 06, 2005 18:40 CST
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OOOHHH NOOOO!!! You going to let Rin die after she has her child?!?!?!?!? You are evil. I just love this pair and you going to kill Rin. >_< Update soon.
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Reviewed By: LiLlAdY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 14:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.........................u are so evil Rin better not die or some bad things will happen to you and i didnt know he came in her i thought he had stopped when he noticed she was getting hurt
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Reviewed By: leila-chan* nsi On: December 06, 2005 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what would sess/rin do if they didn't have jinenji!? they'd both be in big trouble for sure. i love this new twist... having the baby full youkai. how exciting. i am a bit worried tho. i hope everything turns out alright. i never would have thought that the "transformed sesshy" sex would have had that effect. man, now i Know i'm hooked. rin is gonna be in for a hell of a pregnancy. i wonder if it will last longer/shorter than a regular one considering the circumstances. hmmm.
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Reviewed By: ladyrinremix(NSI) On: December 06, 2005 10:39 CST
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I've come to the conclusion that all my favorite writers are sadist. Yes that includes you. Not only do you toy with my emotions, but you down right trample them. SIGH anyway you did warn me about it going down high I just didn't think this would be the way it was going. Don't worry I still love it and like the little sadist in me I'll be back for more. I'm in it for the long haul but just how long is this tale??? I'm curious. :)
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Title: A new begining, a new hope
Reviewed By: cs7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 04:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly enjoyed every bit of your story so far. Like everyone else, I think you are a fantastic and creative writer. Love Ya and I will always be your fan in whatever you do...... Buny Owner
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Reviewed By: shadow cat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 03:42 CST
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very good fics. i like it very much. please continue this story. i hope nothing to bad happens to Rin.
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Title: To Have the Cake or Eat It
Reviewed By: Christal On: December 02, 2005 08:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya there: How are you doing? Sorry for not writing reviews, my Apple laptop just completely went black and wouldn't start back up again. So now I am on my ancient Gateway laptop from the 90's. It's on its last legs but still hanging on. I should be getting my Apple back soon. I loved your little author's quick note stating that bad stuffs all the way hence forth because you are evil, and it made me laugh so hard. The chapter was well-written as always and am looking forward to reading what's going to happen next to Rin and Sess and the rest of the gang. I just can't get enough of your writing and use of grammar. Take care of you and thank you. Your fan, Christal
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Reviewed By: James Lucient, NSI On: December 01, 2005 06:18 CST
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Oh come on! You can't seriously give this fiction a bad ending! *pouts*. Damnit. I love it anyway. Especially little things, like how you say "dumb folded" instead of "dumb founded". I like how proper and pronounced you are. Impeccable grammar. I can't wait to see what happens next, even though I'm sadened by your evil ass AN. GRRR. James
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Reviewed By: leila-chan* nsi On: December 01, 2005 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooo-hoho! whaddaya mean bad stuff? crap, just when everything seemed to right itself, too. ; ) i am curious to see how things will turn out if kag/inu/keiko end up staying at sess's place. hmmm. oh, about touching your fingers to your earlobe when you've burned them...i've never heard of that one before. does it work? if so, i will totally give that a chance since i tend to be clumsy at times. only "at times" you see. ha. thanks. can't wait fer tha angst!
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