| "A new beginning, a new hope" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Reviewed By: simplyelena On: March 17, 2006 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. Sess maybe slightly OOC but I still loved him. Overall, I just felt that there needs to be a continuation like the first two stories are part of a trilogy. A part 3 should be written. Yuudai is special involving some kind of prophecy as you mentioned in the story. Of course that's just my opinion. PS Gotta love happy endings.
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Reviewed By: kananeko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME....thats all I can say
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Title: Epilogue
Reviewed By: SweetyPieRin (not logged on) On: February 17, 2006 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL! ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! You are truly a magnificent writer! Oh my gosh, I was tearing in this chapter! This whole fanfic was written so well! Be proud of your work! Excellent job! ^ _ ^ ~*~SweetyPieRin~*~
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 15:17 CST
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Lol, I comment on your grammar, and then I write "seen" instead of "scene." Jeez. And I just wanted to clarify about that comment - I understand how Rin could go into her alternate life, but the whole Shota knowing about Sesshoumaru and giving her up is what confused me. Thanks! I'm off to read more of your stories...^_^
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, this was a great story. I'll explain my rating, though. Cons: 1. I don't think that Sesshoumaru would EVER even THINK the word "gosh." Ever. 2. You had a few grammatical mistakes and mix-ups, such as when Inuyasha says that Rin's marking is on her back, when I thought that it was on her neck... 3. Where did the seen with Sota come from? How could he affect her from the future in her unconcious state? Maybe I'm just slow, but I really didn't get this part... Pros: 1. No immediate gratification! =D A lot of authors will just go straight to how much the characters are destined to be together. You really developed your story, and didn't take any shortcuts. Very nice. 2. Pretty original plot. I enjoyed it ^_^ 3. Other than the "gosh" aspect, Sesshoumaru seemed pretty in character, although I still have my doubts about the wish thing... still, you worked it out very nicely.
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Reviewed By: James Lucient On: February 10, 2006 09:36 CST
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Awww sweetheart... I apologize. I haven't been doing well. Been working myself to death. heh. But it's a long story. I do think about you, I haven't forgotten you, and baby even mentioned that I hadn't mentioned your story or you lately. I just haven't been around, but I will be as soon as stuff settles. :)
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 11:33 CST
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wow, i should be the one thanking you. good luck with your performance! i can't wait to see more for demon of my heart. that one is so cute. i don't know if i'll ever start a fic or not, but thank you for the encouragement. you're so nice. =D tc
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Reviewed By: rinreddot *nsi* On: February 05, 2006 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I've been missed. I'm SORRRRRRRRRY. I'm a horrible fan I know I always forget to review but don't think I haven't been reading every delicious chapter. Its so sad when such a good story comes to an end :(. But at least your still writing and I can't wait to read more of your works. The ending is perfect and I can't wait to see the oneshots you have planned. BTW this is my final name change rinreddot. So if I ever get around to posting my stuff it will be under that. I also emailed you my new email, you got it right? :(
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Reviewed By: DPM On: January 31, 2006 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...I got it. I must have not read all of chapter 45 in its entirety. For some reasons, the story ended with her looking at the white apparitin disappearing from sight. Not until today did I see the continuation of the chapter explaining the coming of her son and that she woke up from her coma. So intricate. So totally believable and lovely.. Did I mention I love you ?!??!!? LOL.... ;-)
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Reviewed By: DPM On: January 30, 2006 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you !!!! Sniffles, sniffles here... From previous notes, I was certain that it will be a bittersweet ending with the sacrifice of Rin's life to birth her child. You bad person you, leading us on like that. But Thank you, thank you, thank you for the great fairy tale ending !!! However, I am confused with the Rin in the modern time who is supposedly in London studying art. Was she truly dreaming or did you have parallel existence ? Fabulously executed !!! Thoroughly enjoyed every single moment, every single word.
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Reviewed By: animegirl007(not logged in) On: January 30, 2006 17:53 CST
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Thanks again.....the ending was just perfect....
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Reviewed By: leila-chan* nSi On: January 30, 2006 11:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, unfortunately i didn't get the notification for the ending chap. i just now got the one for the epilogue. i'm so sorry. i wish i had recieved it back then. i'd been waiting to see what would happen, if she would wake up. i love that her son was the one that came to her in the 'comadream' and that he told her his name. it was a beautiful story. i am glad that you like happy endings. me too. if you were to write a sequel, i'd read it!! i am looking forward to you continuing demon of my heart as well. thanks for sharing the fic. yay for yuudai. good name, luc!
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Reviewed By: angelfire777(Christal) On: January 28, 2006 01:20 CST
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You have captured my heart with your writing and I soo appreciate the little "thank you notes" to me and my fellow readers. You gave us your time and passion and for that I thank you. This is a wonderful story and the last chapter had me in tears and your words are still in my head. I would definitely love to see a sequel to this story. I would even take an epilogue or a one-shot. Take care of you.
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Reviewed By: inu wifey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know this seems kind of weird but did you seriously hear that a second series of inuyasha is coming out. i kno im kind of late but i just wanted to ask and tell you that your story so far is awesome, mind you i ony read the first chapter!
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Reviewed By: James and Jamie ((Lucient)) On: January 26, 2006 07:33 CST
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You made baby cry. I really loved it, it was awesome! You should join myspace.com. Kiki and Courtney and Martha and Wendy and I have this little group thing going, and it'd only be right if you were there. The fic was wonderful, Martha. I was sad to see it end. But you're so intuitive, I love your work. Email me, and we'll talk about your next fic. ;)
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