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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy sh*t! she walked in on them! hopefully she'll be too sleepy to realize anything. man, with kids in the house you gotta be careful. that happenend to me once when i was like 8 or 9 yrs. old. my little bro was around 2 yrs. old and he wanted to sleep with me because there was a thunderstorm that night. i was like, no way so i took him to my parents room, and i remember candles and lots of rolling around covered (thankfully) by blankets. i didn't know what to do so i just threw my brother in there and shut the door since i had already opened it! what a nightmare. eewwwww!! lol. anyway, can't wait for a new chap. : )
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 12:11 CST
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I've been there. I mean, I don't have kids, but I dated a chick who had a kid once. He walked in on us, and would not leave. It was completely embarassing. We broke up over it because she thought it was hillarious, and always brought it up. I don't think shit like that is for a child's eyes. Great progress on the fic, as always, it was a pleasure to read. :)
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Title: A New Beginning, A New Hope
Reviewed By: Muneca2Sexy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like to read all the chapters avalible first so sorry if u never heard of me. I liked it very much, please update soon. I love the violin and all music it was a nice touch to the story.
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Title: A Test of Love (Part 2)
Reviewed By: angelfire777 (NSI) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 09:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya there: How are you? It was heartbreaking to read about Rin asking if Sess had hated her. Man, I could feel the tenderness and passion in your writing. I just love how you are so creative with this Rin and Sess fic. Thank you for the kind author's note and please know that you are appreciated. Take care of you! Your fan, Christal
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like that sess is willing to put aside his pride for rin and realizes that she is human and Needs things like comfort and reassurement. having kagome beat some sense into his thick skull is probably a good motivator, tho. ^__^ expecting a baby is bound to throw any couple for a loop no matter how long they've been together. it's a new experience for both. but also a beautiful one. i just want to say that you've been so creative with the whole fic that anyone, male or female, would be attracted to it. honest! : )
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Reviewed By: Lucient NSI On: November 22, 2005 19:06 CST
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What a nice song. And uh... some of us know a little french, so a big sappy "awwww" to you. lol. I'm glad those two came out of it. I hate fighting, because I feel so guilty, wether or not I should ((and I almost always should)). It's murder to be apart and upset with eachother. I try to avoid it at all costs, now. Especially since I almost lost her forever. :(
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Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 17:33 CST
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Another Great CHAPTER! I'm just happy you updated before the holidays. Which by the way I hope you have a great Thanksgiving! PS You thought sadsoul was a guy! I dunno how I should feel about that. Its funny the name sadsoul comes from suffering from major sloth. I rarely sign in, and I'm just to laxy to write out ladyrinremixNSI...ack. So thats why sometimes I review under sadsoul. I never told anyone the reason why don't know why I decided to bore you with the whole story. Well anyway...Your story isnt girlish at all. So don't say it like its a bad thing. I can see many many many more lovely chapters coming from you and I can't wait. AND I'm not just saying that cuz I'm a girl!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 11:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read lucients a.n in Y.Y. regarding your fics and thought i should check ya out. i became more empowered to do so after seeing that you only had 30-something reviews. i read all of your first story and thought it was great. definitely the perfect precursor to this fic. there really aren't many sess/rin fics out there and i am always delighted to find one. but most amazingly, yours is well thought out and doesn't make me cringe. i will usually decide if a story is even worth reading after the first chap, or even paragraph! i most certainly stuck with this one. ; ) you are a success!! i am so ready for the next chap. i have so many good things to say about your story, so i'll try to keep it simple. i have both shed a few tears and laughed out loud. throughout, you have portrayed the characters in a believable way and kept them true to themselves. that is most important. you have much talent. keep it up. please don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews. your story is one that i wish i had found earlier. thanks.
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Title: A Test of Love (Part 1)
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Believe me when I say that I do love and like this story as much as you were dying to write it. Thank you for dedicating this chapter to all us gals, (Angellips, sad soul, teardrop, DPM), out there. I feel very honored. I liked the passion and intensity in Sess when he thought Rin wasn't taking care of herself. It was also sad to read about Rin not being able to explain herself to Sess. The argument was written very well. I hope violin practice is going well and take care of you! Christal
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Reviewed By: leilachan* nsi On: November 17, 2005 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read lucients a.n in beautiful promise regarding your fics and thought i should check ya out. i became more empowered to do so after seeing that you only had 30-something reviews. i read all of your first story and thought it was great. definitely the perfect precursor to this fic. there really aren't many sess/rin fics out there and i am always delighted to find one. but most amazingly, yours is well thought out and doesn't make me cringe. i will usually decide if a story is even worth reading after the first chap, or even paragraph! i most certainly stuck with this one. ; ) you are a success!! i am so ready for the next chap. i have so many good things to say about your story, so i'll try to keep it simple. i have both shed a few tears and laughed out loud. throughout, you have portrayed the characters in a believable way and kept them true to themselves. that is most important. you have much talent. keep it up. please don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews. your story is one that i wish i had found earlier. thanks.
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Title: aka sad soul
Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally signed in just for you. God how I love your story you just don't know how much I looked forward to it. I hope Kagomes gives him HELL! Sess is gonna feel so bad....ehehhehe let him suffer. Oh I can't wait for the next chapter..:D
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Reviewed By: Lucient, NSI On: November 17, 2005 12:00 CST
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Or it could be because you spell practice with an "s" and you also use the word "insensible", which is hardly common here. ;) I know how Rin feels about her violin. I play the saxophone myself. I would give anything to be able to perform again. Jeez, Rin and Sessh need to grow the hell up, although if she would have had the strenght, she would have beaten his ass for breaking the instrument. I hope she doesn't continue getting sick. Sessh had better do something... and fast.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 03:46 CST
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I saw the third and 4th movie while I was out of town. Don't waste your time on the 4th movie. The ending was horrible. I really hope this 5th movie is not a rumor. I really wish there'd be one more for closure when Rumiko ends the manga.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 03:14 CST
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Wow! You said hello! lol. I even made a crack about you ignoring me. But I did plug you, and that's all that matters. This fic definitley deserves more readers........Here's the link to see all of my fics. If you can't see them, try selecting "all" in the ratings categoty. The current one is Beautiful Promise.......... http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/src.php/u/Lucient
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Title: The Hearts of Kins
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Howdy there: How are you doing? I hope you are doing well. Thank you for the A/N. I really appreciate the fact that you take the time to share your passion with us and then take the time to answer your readers and fans alike. Thank you. This chapter was very detailed, and I had to laugh at the bantering between Sess and Inu. I like how you write about Sess's fear and restlessness to try and help Rin. Awesome update! Keep up the good work and take care of you! Your fan, Christal
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