| "A new beginning, a new hope" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Title: A New Beginning, A New Hope
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 17:16 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: celestial samurai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 22:13 CDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! You had to end it there! Please update soon
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Reviewed By: DPM On: September 30, 2005 19:19 CDT
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I do hope that she'll return to her own time. She had a last-minute revelation that she really didn't want to leave him, remember ???!?!?
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Reviewed By: kittay On: September 27, 2005 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yaay i luv how u update so often!! it's such a great story!
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Reviewed By: truelove [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story.Sess/Rin are my fav couple next to Inu/Kag.
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Reviewed By: celestial samurai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 02:22 CDT
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Great story more pleas
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Reviewed By: Angellips On: September 20, 2005 17:51 CDT
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Woot! Great Chapter! I am loving your story. I really don't know why other ppl aren't reviewing either /puzzled look. It's an extremely well writen, interesting story and has a very lovely flow. You DO have almost one thousand hits at this time - so obviously there are readers out there! Keep up the great work! And good luck with your dinner party playing :) I'm sure you'll be just fine.
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Reviewed By: DPM On: September 19, 2005 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's wrong with people.I can't believe that not more reviews were done for this fanfic. People are just too lazy. Well, here's my thought. I really enjoyed both the 1st fic and this subsequent sequel. You've done both main characters justice because they are so IN character. Sess, no matter how intelligent he is, can royally muck up his personal life. Evident by your fics. Glad you are making him sweat a bit. I firmly believe that no matter how beautiful/perfect one is, one must have some struggle otherwise one's life would be a long bore....(helps to keep things in check and balance, don't you think ???!?!?) Writing both perspectives of Sess/Rin allows your readers to delve and understand your characters much better and empathize with them much more. Although, I am glad that you seem to slant more on Sess. That's good and I applaud your attempt. He can be such a difficult guy to describe. Please do continue. Your story is very fluid and it transitions smoothly from one chapter to the next without loosing a beat. Great job !!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness n.s.i. On: September 18, 2005 00:16 CDT
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The title confused me because you can't really tell what this story is sequel of by those letters. I would go back and remove that and then put the part about it being a sequel into the summary so people can actually read it.
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Reviewed By: Angellips On: September 14, 2005 17:29 CDT
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Keep up the great work! I'm really enjoying your story :) You update so often - I find I'm logging on to look for it. Thank you! *huggles Angel
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Reviewed By: thegirl On: September 11, 2005 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I'm really enjoying it! I can't wait for more :D
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Reviewed By: Kittay On: September 09, 2005 20:53 CDT
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awsome awsome story! can`t wait for the next chapter ^_^
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Reviewed By: Angellips On: September 09, 2005 06:21 CDT
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It's a wonderful story so far :) I do look forward to the spell being broken and definately being a S/R romance. But don't be too easy on poor Sessy.
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