| "A new beginning, a new hope" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lucient, not signed in On: November 11, 2005 00:10 CST
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I gave you a shout in one of my fics. I hope if anyone actually reads my ANs they'll come. I love the way you've pieced this together. Especially with the honey. It's such an interesting and almost necessary addition. Most writers, myself included, write youkai pregnancies without a hitch. Bravo ;) James
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Title: The Gift of Life part 3
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 10:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there: How are you? Thank you for the update on your wonderful story and the A/N. I am very sure that you will do well practicing for next Tuesday's lesson. I love how your story is descriptive and every line detailed with such tenderness and eloquence. I still wish for you to have more readers, but know that I will always be here. Take care of you, Christal
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Title: The Gift of Life part 2
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there: I am happy about the baby and excited to see what will happen later on. You have put a smile on my face. Take care, Christal
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Reviewed By: Lucient, not signed in On: November 06, 2005 17:06 CST
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Wow, I love how you always write the old soap opera-esque AN's. :) We all knew she was pregnant, that wasn't the point. It was the eloquent word play. I'm repulsed that more people aren't reading this. It's brilliant! I can't wait for your next update! :D James
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 06:43 CST
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OOOOH! Awesome! I added you to my favorites so I could follow along. :D I can't wait for the next update! James
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 05:39 CST
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Brilliant write off of her mating mark. Wow... this story is just... WOW.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 04:57 CST
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Wow... from Feudal Japan to Kagome's world, and no memory? OH I love it. My question is though, what about her mating mark? I must have missed where it vanished or something. And what of Sesshomaru? I'd better read on. :D
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Reviewed By: sad_soul On: November 04, 2005 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story what else can I say. I think she might start acting weird cuz she is preggy.
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Title: Awesome Story!
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there: I just wanted to say that this story so deserves more reviews because it is really an Awesome Story! The way you write about the love between Sess and Rin is really good. I can feel the passion and caring that comes from your writing and it leaves me warm on the inside. Can't wait till the next chapter. Your fan, Christal
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: October 30, 2005 10:17 CST
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I enjoyed this story. I hope that you update soon.
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Reviewed By: sadsoul On: October 29, 2005 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Are you sure that you can just post up to 37 chapters...cuz I;ve read many stories that were past forty. Curse of the Dragon....breaking the girl. You might want to check ont hat before you limit yourself.
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Reviewed By: Angellips On: October 29, 2005 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray! I can review again!!! I am enjoying your story very much :) I can't wait for your updates! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: teardrop [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 23:25 CDT
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i have been reading this story for quite some time but have never reviewed..today for some odd reason i looked at the number of reviews you had and was astounded that there were only 15 for such a marvolous piece of work...i must say that you have realy out done your self on this story...i love the fact that rin plays one of the best string instruments there is ...i my self play the harp and piano...so i know how hard it is to study and perfect a musical score, you realy capture that dedication and you do it so ingeneously...keep up the wonderful work and i apologise for not reviewing sooner i also apologise for any spelling errors in this review...spelling is not my strong suit....
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Title: Great story!
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there: Just wanted to tell you how much this story has touched me. I love how you add the violin into the story, and the love between the two main characters. Keep up the great story and take all the time you need. Take care, Christal
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Reviewed By: kitsune fox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 00:16 CDT
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Write now! Write now! please! must know what happens next!
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