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Reviewed By: James Lucient, NSI On: December 01, 2005 06:18 CST Comment/Review: Oh come on! You can't seriously give this fiction a bad ending! *pouts*. Damnit. I love it anyway. Especially little things, like how you say "dumb folded" instead of "dumb founded". I like how proper and pronounced you are. Impeccable grammar. I can't wait to see what happens next, even though I'm sadened by your evil ass AN. GRRR. James
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Reviewed By: leila-chan* nsi On: December 01, 2005 01:12 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: nooo-hoho! whaddaya mean bad stuff? crap, just when everything seemed to right itself, too. ; ) i am curious to see how things will turn out if kag/inu/keiko end up staying at sess's place. hmmm. oh, about touching your fingers to your earlobe when you've burned them...i've never heard of that one before. does it work? if so, i will totally give that a chance since i tend to be clumsy at times. only "at times" you see. ha. thanks. can't wait fer tha angst!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 14:55 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: holy sh*t! she walked in on them! hopefully she'll be too sleepy to realize anything. man, with kids in the house you gotta be careful. that happenend to me once when i was like 8 or 9 yrs. old. my little bro was around 2 yrs. old and he wanted to sleep with me because there was a thunderstorm that night. i was like, no way so i took him to my parents room, and i remember candles and lots of rolling around covered (thankfully) by blankets. i didn't know what to do so i just threw my brother in there and shut the door since i had already opened it! what a nightmare. eewwwww!! lol. anyway, can't wait for a new chap. : )
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 12:11 CST Comment/Review: I've been there. I mean, I don't have kids, but I dated a chick who had a kid once. He walked in on us, and would not leave. It was completely embarassing. We broke up over it because she thought it was hillarious, and always brought it up. I don't think shit like that is for a child's eyes. Great progress on the fic, as always, it was a pleasure to read. :)
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Title: A New Beginning, A New Hope Reviewed By: Muneca2Sexy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 23:43 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like to read all the chapters avalible first so sorry if u never heard of me. I liked it very much, please update soon. I love the violin and all music it was a nice touch to the story.
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Title: A Test of Love (Part 2) Reviewed By: angelfire777 (NSI) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 09:27 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Heya there: How are you? It was heartbreaking to read about Rin asking if Sess had hated her. Man, I could feel the tenderness and passion in your writing. I just love how you are so creative with this Rin and Sess fic. Thank you for the kind author's note and please know that you are appreciated. Take care of you! Your fan, Christal
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 13:39 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i like that sess is willing to put aside his pride for rin and realizes that she is human and Needs things like comfort and reassurement. having kagome beat some sense into his thick skull is probably a good motivator, tho. ^__^ expecting a baby is bound to throw any couple for a loop no matter how long they've been together. it's a new experience for both. but also a beautiful one. i just want to say that you've been so creative with the whole fic that anyone, male or female, would be attracted to it. honest! : )
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Reviewed By: Lucient NSI On: November 22, 2005 19:06 CST Comment/Review: What a nice song. And uh... some of us know a little french, so a big sappy "awwww" to you. lol. I'm glad those two came out of it. I hate fighting, because I feel so guilty, wether or not I should ((and I almost always should)). It's murder to be apart and upset with eachother. I try to avoid it at all costs, now. Especially since I almost lost her forever. :(
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Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 17:33 CST Comment/Review: Another Great CHAPTER! I'm just happy you updated before the holidays. Which by the way I hope you have a great Thanksgiving! PS You thought sadsoul was a guy! I dunno how I should feel about that. Its funny the name sadsoul comes from suffering from major sloth. I rarely sign in, and I'm just to laxy to write out ladyrinremixNSI...ack. So thats why sometimes I review under sadsoul. I never told anyone the reason why don't know why I decided to bore you with the whole story. Well anyway...Your story isnt girlish at all. So don't say it like its a bad thing. I can see many many many more lovely chapters coming from you and I can't wait. AND I'm not just saying that cuz I'm a girl!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 11:42 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i read lucients a.n in Y.Y. regarding your fics and thought i should check ya out. i became more empowered to do so after seeing that you only had 30-something reviews. i read all of your first story and thought it was great. definitely the perfect precursor to this fic. there really aren't many sess/rin fics out there and i am always delighted to find one. but most amazingly, yours is well thought out and doesn't make me cringe. i will usually decide if a story is even worth reading after the first chap, or even paragraph! i most certainly stuck with this one. ; ) you are a success!! i am so ready for the next chap. i have so many good things to say about your story, so i'll try to keep it simple. i have both shed a few tears and laughed out loud. throughout, you have portrayed the characters in a believable way and kept them true to themselves. that is most important. you have much talent. keep it up. please don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews. your story is one that i wish i had found earlier. thanks.
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Title: A Test of Love (Part 1) Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 21:39 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yes! Believe me when I say that I do love and like this story as much as you were dying to write it. Thank you for dedicating this chapter to all us gals, (Angellips, sad soul, teardrop, DPM), out there. I feel very honored. I liked the passion and intensity in Sess when he thought Rin wasn't taking care of herself. It was also sad to read about Rin not being able to explain herself to Sess. The argument was written very well. I hope violin practice is going well and take care of you! Christal
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Reviewed By: leilachan* nsi On: November 17, 2005 19:04 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i read lucients a.n in beautiful promise regarding your fics and thought i should check ya out. i became more empowered to do so after seeing that you only had 30-something reviews. i read all of your first story and thought it was great. definitely the perfect precursor to this fic. there really aren't many sess/rin fics out there and i am always delighted to find one. but most amazingly, yours is well thought out and doesn't make me cringe. i will usually decide if a story is even worth reading after the first chap, or even paragraph! i most certainly stuck with this one. ; ) you are a success!! i am so ready for the next chap. i have so many good things to say about your story, so i'll try to keep it simple. i have both shed a few tears and laughed out loud. throughout, you have portrayed the characters in a believable way and kept them true to themselves. that is most important. you have much talent. keep it up. please don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews. your story is one that i wish i had found earlier. thanks.
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Title: aka sad soul Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 18:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I finally signed in just for you. God how I love your story you just don't know how much I looked forward to it. I hope Kagomes gives him HELL! Sess is gonna feel so bad....ehehhehe let him suffer. Oh I can't wait for the next chapter..:D
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Reviewed By: Lucient, NSI On: November 17, 2005 12:00 CST Comment/Review: Or it could be because you spell practice with an "s" and you also use the word "insensible", which is hardly common here. ;) I know how Rin feels about her violin. I play the saxophone myself. I would give anything to be able to perform again. Jeez, Rin and Sessh need to grow the hell up, although if she would have had the strenght, she would have beaten his ass for breaking the instrument. I hope she doesn't continue getting sick. Sessh had better do something... and fast.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 03:46 CST Comment/Review: I saw the third and 4th movie while I was out of town. Don't waste your time on the 4th movie. The ending was horrible. I really hope this 5th movie is not a rumor. I really wish there'd be one more for closure when Rumiko ends the manga.
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