| "The Offering" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: nyuu_nyuu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 11:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
do wath you want
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Title: go for it!
Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(nsi) On: January 23, 2008 15:13 EST
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If u want to put in a rape sceen, it's your story, n u kno a lot of pple just make lines in the middle of the chapter stating that the rape sceen has started n then another line across the screen once ended. Though it's all up to u. Personally, tho about the rape sceen I donno what u got planned n I would hope b/w k n sess but I hope it's not too brutal. Some rapes sound so harsh u wonder realistically how ny one could have really moved on from that.
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 10:30 EST
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In response to your question: Well, you did rate your fanfic as 'x', so it would stand to reason that there would be some more 'adult' scenes. People who don't want to read the rape scene can skip over it. Perhaps you could warn when and where in the story the scene is, and then as soon as it's done, do something like "~end rape scene~" or something. That's what I would do. BTW Great job with the fanfic. I like how it's going along. Keep it up, and I'm glad you're back!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 02:15 EST
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plz update soon i love it oh and put the rape in!
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Reviewed By: Sailor Saturn415 On: January 16, 2008 21:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic, based on an even better idea. I'm really enjoying this story, although I'm not always sure what's going on. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 23:47 EST
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Screw the softies! Just put up a disclaimer in big letters, and you have done your job. Trust me, you would get really tired of emailing everyone a chapter of the story. Fantastic grammar and spelling. That makes a world of difference! Good luck posting the next part!
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 04:16 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my thoughts on your question? just put the scene in, who cares if anyone throws a fit. it's your fanfic & the rating is obvious. =) also, as far as your writing is concerned, it is wonderful...i think you are too hard on yourself. ;) cant wait for the next chapter!! also, are you going to continue any of your other fanfics? catch you later...
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Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi On: January 12, 2008 00:02 EST
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I was wondering... I just saw your profile and many of your stories are discontinued. For real? I was hoping that you'd finish them... Will you still write other stories involving this couple? You have a very unique way to portray them and I like it. It is rather refreshing to read your stories.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi On: January 11, 2008 18:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Put in the chapter, but tell the readers before and at the end. That way, We'll either read it or skip it. Great chapter by the way!! ^_^ Never expected mermaids! That was a good surprise!
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Title: Answer
Reviewed By: NakedFlowers [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 17:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I personally think you should just include the piece in the chapter. I was thinking over a similar delima in one of my own stories. But, the stories have ratings for a reason, with reading a higher rated story comes the maturity and understanding that their may be some things of more graphic nature, like lemons or in this case rape. If you feel that you want to warn people, warn them in the beginning of the chapter and then maybe put a little line of ~*~*~* before and after the scene so they can skip it and continue with the chapter if they wish. You should definately NOT cripple your own creativity and writing in order to remove something that you wanted to put into the story for other people, if they don't feel up to reading it, perhaps they shouldn't read higher rated storiesm, or they can skim down the page until that part is over like you would have to in a real published book. You don't get to tell the published author to take out a scene and they don't hear you if you complain. If people do bellyache about it, just ignore them. Most of all, write for yourself first, don't cripple your creativity and don't let other's tell you what should be taken out or not. Okies, that was a lot of writing... >.>; sorries. Well, on a slightly different note. WOW, that was really creative, quite the twist what with mermaids in the bath and all... le gasp! Do they spy on Lord Fluffy?! ^.~ Just joking. I thought it was really creative, but I do have one thing to critique, the way that you ended the chapter kind of removed the other characters from the story. It's not neccessarily a bad thing, but if someone had been away for a while and was just getting back in to this story it may have been a let down. There you have it, my only critique, loved the rest and can't wait for the next chapter! Wishes for love and great writing, Rhapsody
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Reviewed By: Lucarna On: January 11, 2008 04:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Put it in the chapter but label when it starts and finishes so people can choose weather they want to read it or not.
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Reviewed By: sesshou-saseko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 01:19 EST
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Thank you for coming back and not abandoning this fic. I agree with DarkMe... I am for the rape scene.
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Title: Post it all
Reviewed By: DarkMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 00:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Post it, you have the rating marked for it and you have given warning. If you want to give an option mark the scene where it starts and ends so the squimish can skip it. Other than that I say write it and post it, its darn annoying having to hunt down complete editions.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi On: January 02, 2008 02:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never thought that I'd see the next chapter out so soon! Oh well, who am I to complain? ^_~ Just say that you'll finish your stories and I'll be fine. As long as it does not take you a whole year to update again, you're okay in my book! ^_^ Though, a sooner update wouldn't hurt at all... I can't wait to find out what happened to Kagome. Poor girl, Sesshoumaru is going to be so pissed off that he will not event let the female breath in peace when he gets her back. SO... could you update as soon as you can? Like, fast? XD 'Cause I wanna know!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 22:57 EST
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Oh my! A face in the water? Ehhh?! I'm not really a fan of Sess/Kag, but I just had to try this fanfic out and I love it! The way you made Sess act was so cute, I just loved it. I can't wait to hear more, please update soon. Ahah, how ever did you get the idea to make Inuyasha 'lend' Kagome off to Sess? That is like, the best idea. Anyway, congrats on such a great idea and update soon, please.
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