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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(2lz2lgn) On: March 23, 2007 14:43 EDT
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uh! it seemed like forever since you updated this story! But im sooo glad you did!!! its getting awfully interesting!!! I LOVE IT!! and what is it sesshomaru showed the spy??? Im dying of curiosity here!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! PLZ!!!!!!!! Oh!!! BTW, is kags gonna be miko/youkai???? nywaz, UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Relyx On: March 21, 2007 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey I hope that sesshomaru can make kagome his mate, and mabye mother of a pup (a birth mother) YES I WANT LEMON.
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 21:26 EDT
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I'm enjoying this greatly, and can't wait to see what sessy has planned. I hope you don't end up putting the fic on pause due to unwanted reviews.
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 13:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story, it is one of the few that I read every single word instead of just skipping some to the next quote... lol. Please update soon. *favs*
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Title: whatever grow up
Reviewed By: where On: March 17, 2007 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It entertained me got my attention even though your complaining about this meagan whats her or his name and threating not writing for only gods know when is freaking annoying. You need to grow up.
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Reviewed By: sesskitten6 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 17:52 EDT
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I like, I like!! I would love to see how things unfold!!
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Reviewed By: Thelonely_princess On: March 16, 2007 16:02 EDT
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Thank you for updating can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimeHuntress1 On: March 13, 2007 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that I really like this story and I'm glad you updated it. I was getting kinda worried. Truthfully I haven't seen another story like this. Its really original and I can't wait to find out what happens next. The one thing I really like about it is you made it realistic. I like how you made Sesshomaru an actual 'lord'. He has responcibilities and traditions and can be real bastard. The food thing. But he's reasonable, well somewhat anyways. I like the fact that he has a harem or whatever, because its unlikely that he wouldn't. I know it sounds silly but I hate stories that aren't real. I like reading about the characters and their reactions and such, you do really well in this. Thank you so much for updating. I hope you continue to do so, your style is unique in the world of fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: juanca On: March 12, 2007 21:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, this story is ASOME, you are a great writer bye.
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Title: IS GREAT!!!
Reviewed By: sakdren On: March 12, 2007 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic, is GRAEAT ;) can't stop reading. sorry if I don't review much but english is NOT my fist lenguage, i can read it, but writing is diferent :( see you son.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh. I love tghis story please update.
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Reviewed By: rebeliousangel (my username I dont really use) On: March 26, 2006 12:54 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have this bookmarked and whenever I come back to check it, it isnt updated! Please update soon! I am right now hoping you update ever again! This fic is unique and has me very interested. I really want to see what happens next! to put my mind at rest. please contact me at rachierooskie@aol.com thanks!
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Reviewed By: hm... On: March 01, 2006 00:47 EST
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Ummm..the story is ok..I don't really like how you bashed Meagan considering some of your reviews have the same message but different wording...I mean seriously it shouldn't be how or what she says to others, it should be how she responds to YOU! At least she leaves a review...most people don't have that courtesy...I was seriously thinking about not leaving a review (apparently I am not the only one) but then again you are an author and you do deserve something for taking the time to write your story, so here goes... Not bad, I feel that maybe things were a little rushed, just a few mistakes here and there, but anyway over all good story I wish you the best with it, but next time please think about what you are doing before you tell someone to go away from your story...because those kind of reviews are mostly what you are going to get..K? Good luck!
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Reviewed By: inyoukai8 On: January 23, 2006 22:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I write on AFF, just thought I'd pop over and see what was here. I love this story, the concept is interesting and the flow is very good. I will be checking back for updates. Please keep up the excellent work :)
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Reviewed By: miroku'sgirl On: January 23, 2006 19:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i'm like in love with your story! honestly who does inu think he is and that soldier.... watz up with the dog lord, is he falling for the ningen miko? pleeze update! Omg megan, ya i get tons of the same reviews from her, not only that, but email! Its like hello i didn't ask you to drill me for my story i asked for a review and not the same thing over and over, she really should think of different things to review and junk.
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