| "The Offering" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: Thelonely_princess On: March 16, 2007 16:02 EDT
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Thank you for updating can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimeHuntress1 On: March 13, 2007 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that I really like this story and I'm glad you updated it. I was getting kinda worried. Truthfully I haven't seen another story like this. Its really original and I can't wait to find out what happens next. The one thing I really like about it is you made it realistic. I like how you made Sesshomaru an actual 'lord'. He has responcibilities and traditions and can be real bastard. The food thing. But he's reasonable, well somewhat anyways. I like the fact that he has a harem or whatever, because its unlikely that he wouldn't. I know it sounds silly but I hate stories that aren't real. I like reading about the characters and their reactions and such, you do really well in this. Thank you so much for updating. I hope you continue to do so, your style is unique in the world of fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: juanca On: March 12, 2007 21:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, this story is ASOME, you are a great writer bye.
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Title: IS GREAT!!!
Reviewed By: sakdren On: March 12, 2007 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic, is GRAEAT ;) can't stop reading. sorry if I don't review much but english is NOT my fist lenguage, i can read it, but writing is diferent :( see you son.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh. I love tghis story please update.
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Reviewed By: rebeliousangel (my username I dont really use) On: March 26, 2006 12:54 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have this bookmarked and whenever I come back to check it, it isnt updated! Please update soon! I am right now hoping you update ever again! This fic is unique and has me very interested. I really want to see what happens next! to put my mind at rest. please contact me at rachierooskie@aol.com thanks!
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Reviewed By: hm... On: March 01, 2006 00:47 EST
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Ummm..the story is ok..I don't really like how you bashed Meagan considering some of your reviews have the same message but different wording...I mean seriously it shouldn't be how or what she says to others, it should be how she responds to YOU! At least she leaves a review...most people don't have that courtesy...I was seriously thinking about not leaving a review (apparently I am not the only one) but then again you are an author and you do deserve something for taking the time to write your story, so here goes... Not bad, I feel that maybe things were a little rushed, just a few mistakes here and there, but anyway over all good story I wish you the best with it, but next time please think about what you are doing before you tell someone to go away from your story...because those kind of reviews are mostly what you are going to get..K? Good luck!
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Reviewed By: inyoukai8 On: January 23, 2006 22:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I write on AFF, just thought I'd pop over and see what was here. I love this story, the concept is interesting and the flow is very good. I will be checking back for updates. Please keep up the excellent work :)
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Reviewed By: miroku'sgirl On: January 23, 2006 19:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i'm like in love with your story! honestly who does inu think he is and that soldier.... watz up with the dog lord, is he falling for the ningen miko? pleeze update! Omg megan, ya i get tons of the same reviews from her, not only that, but email! Its like hello i didn't ask you to drill me for my story i asked for a review and not the same thing over and over, she really should think of different things to review and junk.
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Reviewed By: J On: January 23, 2006 10:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had considered not reviewing at all after your response to megan. Yes i realize hers arent the best reviews, and yes she does read and review just about everything, but she likes to read and she likes to have ppl update, no reason to holler at her! for goddess sake, thats a quick way to turn people off to your stories. anyway, now that i have that off my chest, on to the story. pretty good, i think. i did find it a little bland...possibily because i prefer a little more detail and it feels like it moves too fast. not quite sure why on the last part though, im still puzzliing that part out. im still a little upset by how you responded to megan and its making it hard for me to come up with a good review for you. if megans reviews bother you that much, have them removed. good luck on your story.
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 21:30 EST
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Are you going to update this? Cause I thought it was really interesting and well written and was curious to see where you were going with it. It was a pretty original idea, I think, too. Keep up the hard work!
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Reviewed By: Vampiress_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it please update soon
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Reviewed By: cute_kirara16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 17:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YaY...great story it's really good i hope you update asap.
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 15:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! awsome plot so far! i love it! gee wonder what sess has got in mind!!!! lol please update!
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Reviewed By: Myou On: October 04, 2005 22:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^__________________^ This should be sweet. We've got the Inuyasha-going-obsessively-evil and kagome about to pair up with Sesshy! I love this plot! Updates please!
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