| "The Offering" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 20:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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i love the plot and enjoy the style. It just seems to flow. Keep up the good work.
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Title: 0.0
Reviewed By: Mimiru229 On: December 16, 2007 13:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow........ MY GOSH THAT WAS SO AWESOMELY AWESOME! YOUR AWESOME AT THIS WOW!
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Title: Impressive
Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 00:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good plot you have going here. I admit I read it and laughed at the implied "The sword is more important then Kagome" in the summary, even though I like her in Fanfictions. Being a writer myself, I understand what it's like to have like a bazillion people reviewing about how I haven't updated in forever. I tend to like the attention because it let's me know how much support I have, though sometimes I sit at my laptop just talking to the screen, making up excuses as to why I haven't written anything. Anyway, really good story you are developing here and I wish you the best on future progress and hope to see your story on the next Inuyasha Fan Guild Award nominees list ;).
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 04:36 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story has great potential and would very much like to see it to its end , please do not be selfish and keep from updating because of a few annoying reviewers , it is most annoying to find a great story and never get to read it to its final passage
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Reviewed By: phoenixavatar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 22:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
I agree with everyone else, this seems like it could unfold to a wonderful tale. Your writing flows smoothly; your style is easy to sink into. Not everyone can write this well. Style wise, better than many of the fics I have read. Now that your ego has been (very appropriately) stroked... either update your story and stop acting like a child or take your unfinished stories down. You are leaving only your readers to suffer the beginnings of a great story that will only leave us wanting! Your writing is excellent, I would love to read more of your work but I have no desire to read good writing that writers won't finish. I see no reason to look into your other works if this is how you treat those who look forward to your writing.
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Reviewed By: tif On: August 27, 2007 20:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls..pls...pls... update update pls......pls...
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Reviewed By: Krytal234 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 04:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I kind of like it veeerrrrryyyyy much and will appreciate it if you'll update it sooner.
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Reviewed By: Azkis Killer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.... me likey lots!!!! Please please please write more. I love your original idea and how you are making the story line play out. Please update, cant wait!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(2lz2lgn) On: April 03, 2007 17:28 EDT
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umm....UPDATE, PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE I CHECK MY MAIL EVERYDAY FOR YOUR UPDATE AND ITS NOT THERE!!!!!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDAAAAAATEF
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(2lz2lgn) On: March 23, 2007 14:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
uh! it seemed like forever since you updated this story! But im sooo glad you did!!! its getting awfully interesting!!! I LOVE IT!! and what is it sesshomaru showed the spy??? Im dying of curiosity here!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! PLZ!!!!!!!! Oh!!! BTW, is kags gonna be miko/youkai???? nywaz, UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Relyx On: March 21, 2007 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey I hope that sesshomaru can make kagome his mate, and mabye mother of a pup (a birth mother) YES I WANT LEMON.
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 21:26 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this greatly, and can't wait to see what sessy has planned. I hope you don't end up putting the fic on pause due to unwanted reviews.
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 13:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story, it is one of the few that I read every single word instead of just skipping some to the next quote... lol. Please update soon. *favs*
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Title: whatever grow up
Reviewed By: where On: March 17, 2007 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It entertained me got my attention even though your complaining about this meagan whats her or his name and threating not writing for only gods know when is freaking annoying. You need to grow up.
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Reviewed By: sesskitten6 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 17:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
I like, I like!! I would love to see how things unfold!!
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