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Title: Coolio
Reviewed By: ice vixen x (nsi) On: December 24, 2007 22:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I love this pairing and the situation you are using. Good work. Can't wait to see what's going on with the face and all. Please update soon. None of the other stories i'm reading seem to update often enough for me. heh. neways, keep up the good work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: NakedFlowers [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 16:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, so far I really like this fic, I think it has great promise to be both exciting and funny. I like the originality of the piece, but at times feel that it is going a little slow, your chapters are longer, but at times seem like they could go further for all of the words in them. That is not to say that I don't like it or that I'm trying to be rude or say you should change your style of writing, just my opinion. I enjoyed the story thus far, loved the cliffy, love how you're portraying character thoughts and can't wait for the next chapter! NakedFlowers
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: December 24, 2007 09:40 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, the story's pretty good, not many grammatical errors, etc.(you have no idea what a pet peeve that is) I like the route you're taking it and can't wait to see the progression. I do, however, need to tell you that whatever issues you have with this "Megan" person really shouldn't have any bearing on putting up new chapters or discontinuing a story. Fine you don't like her, but putting a disclaimer in every chapter about it makes an author look very immature. Considering how many constructive reviews you've received you should focus on the positive reviewers rather than someone you obviously don't like. Your readers are here for "your" story not to hear about disputes between you and your reviewers. I only say this because I believe constructive criticism should be taken as a means to help an author grow. I do hope you continue honing your craft and learn to ignore those who's goal it may be to irritate you enough to gain mention in your chapters. If that is indeed her goal she has greatly succeeded. Good luck with all future endeavors :)
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Title: You're Back!
Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi On: December 21, 2007 01:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you're back! I was wondering if you were going to drop your fanfics. I'm glad you didn't. And, no, I don't expect a dozen updates all of a sudden... :P Though, a few wouldn't hurt! Just... promise you'll finish your stories and I'll be happy with that! :D I can't wait for your next updates! For ALL of your stories! XP
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 17:10 EST
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Wow. This has turned out to be amazing. I really hope that you update soon! I'll fave this and check my mail everyday for an update message, so, if not just for me, update for all of your adoring fans!
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Reviewed By: zenfluence On: December 18, 2007 22:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't say for anyone else, but I've liked this story from the beginning... I found the plot innovative compared to other repetitive plost.... ~may creativeness fly your way (or something of that nature XD)
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 20:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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i love the plot and enjoy the style. It just seems to flow. Keep up the good work.
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Title: 0.0
Reviewed By: Mimiru229 On: December 16, 2007 13:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow........ MY GOSH THAT WAS SO AWESOMELY AWESOME! YOUR AWESOME AT THIS WOW!
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Title: Impressive
Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 00:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good plot you have going here. I admit I read it and laughed at the implied "The sword is more important then Kagome" in the summary, even though I like her in Fanfictions. Being a writer myself, I understand what it's like to have like a bazillion people reviewing about how I haven't updated in forever. I tend to like the attention because it let's me know how much support I have, though sometimes I sit at my laptop just talking to the screen, making up excuses as to why I haven't written anything. Anyway, really good story you are developing here and I wish you the best on future progress and hope to see your story on the next Inuyasha Fan Guild Award nominees list ;).
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 04:36 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story has great potential and would very much like to see it to its end , please do not be selfish and keep from updating because of a few annoying reviewers , it is most annoying to find a great story and never get to read it to its final passage
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Reviewed By: phoenixavatar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 22:20 EDT
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I agree with everyone else, this seems like it could unfold to a wonderful tale. Your writing flows smoothly; your style is easy to sink into. Not everyone can write this well. Style wise, better than many of the fics I have read. Now that your ego has been (very appropriately) stroked... either update your story and stop acting like a child or take your unfinished stories down. You are leaving only your readers to suffer the beginnings of a great story that will only leave us wanting! Your writing is excellent, I would love to read more of your work but I have no desire to read good writing that writers won't finish. I see no reason to look into your other works if this is how you treat those who look forward to your writing.
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Reviewed By: tif On: August 27, 2007 20:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls..pls...pls... update update pls......pls...
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Reviewed By: Krytal234 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 04:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I kind of like it veeerrrrryyyyy much and will appreciate it if you'll update it sooner.
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Reviewed By: Azkis Killer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.... me likey lots!!!! Please please please write more. I love your original idea and how you are making the story line play out. Please update, cant wait!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(2lz2lgn) On: April 03, 2007 17:28 EDT
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umm....UPDATE, PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE I CHECK MY MAIL EVERYDAY FOR YOUR UPDATE AND ITS NOT THERE!!!!!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDAAAAAATEF
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