| "The Offering" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: lulu112 On: May 02, 2015 01:34 EDT
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I have this one marked as a favorite, please update.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2011 01:05 EDT
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Been a few years but still can't wait for you to update!! Very good fic so far and I want to see how it plays out when he tries to explain all this to her.....shit's gonna hit the fan and I can't wait!! |
Reviewed By: meganlol On: July 01, 2011 10:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
TBH your story is awful and your AN's are stupid. Glad you dont write anymore :) |
Reviewed By: sakdren On: January 16, 2011 19:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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please update, your story is great and I realy want to know what happen next |
Reviewed By: FearFadesHopeLives4Eva On: January 09, 2011 00:56 EST
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How come you stopped there?! :( D: |
Reviewed By: um...okay On: May 16, 2010 01:51 EDT
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This rape scene is so fricken random that it completely throws the entire story off. First you have sesshoumaru being somewhat caring for her, and then after she's given immortality, he rapes her? Yeah, that made a LOT of sense.
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2010 22:47 EST
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I know it's been a year, but it would still be nice to see an update. I love it!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: CrystalAmber [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2010 17:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks, best story i've read so far... And thanks for updating recently! hope you update again soon! ^_^ ~♥~
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2009 17:11 EDT
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Are you gonna update soon, its a good story
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Reviewed By: fallenangeldai666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 17:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, mok. im not quite sure how i want to phrase this.... i was not that fond of the rape scene even though i understand it had vital importance to the story. Im not critising your writing but had to tell you...still a little iffy on that about whether you had to do the scene like that. I am however, supremely glad that you updated and I hope that your life doesn't take over so much again that you won't be able to post chapters soon.I really like this story, it has such an interesting twisted sort of plot that I've never quite seen before but am very interested in. So please update soon, and keep the fun good reading coming.
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Reviewed By: KAGOME_ fan21 On: March 04, 2009 16:03 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the story update soon.
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: March 02, 2009 21:10 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Update Soon. XOXO
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: March 02, 2009 17:38 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON
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Title: HOT!!!
Reviewed By: house bunny On: February 28, 2009 17:22 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW! I love the story it was great i can't wait for the next character.
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 23:01 EST
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Oh and Kitsune, we know that it would never actually happen in the story. But that doesn't mean the idea isn't bad! Heck, it's been on my mind lately too. How to make Inu-Yasha willingly hand over Kagome? Again, this might not be probably in the actual story line, but STFU and GTFO. If you really don't like it, don't read it.
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