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Title: racoon rabies
Reviewed By: Smurf Butt On: November 14, 2005 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowee! goodo! m-azing! i like m&ms. with cheese whiz! almost as much as i like yur story! heehehhee it was really exciting and worrisome. please!!! i beg of you!!1 morE!! moREEE~~~!!!!
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Title: more on others
Reviewed By: Sasuke luvrr On: November 14, 2005 18:08 CST
Comment/Review:
you need to put in more on the pther characters, they are kinda left out, and i know they're not the main ones, but still some of my favs. Keep writing please. if you do, i'll review.
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Title: nameo
Reviewed By: Nick the name On: November 14, 2005 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! I loved this fanfic!! It was like one of the best I have like ever read!! It's so suspensful, so i won't ruin the plot by saying anymore to the other reviewers and readers. You tell us to review, i tell you to write!!
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Title: Squirrel
Reviewed By: Nibbly Nut On: November 14, 2005 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the only thing wrong with the story is you need to spell check it a bit more. It's not bad at all, but you'll lose rating marks this way. Also, I love the olde japanese, funny joke.
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Reviewed By: Naruto, my hero On: November 14, 2005 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to tell me more!!! i am in such suspense about the voice, and i need to read more, this is just cruel to leave me hanging!!! MAKE MORE PLEASE!!! (L)
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Title: pickled beets
Reviewed By: pickles ought to be in a story On: November 14, 2005 18:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I think you should add in stuff about pickles, because they are so tasty!! Oh, and aout the story, i still don't get how naruto and neji got back, explain more if you weren't planning on it in following chapters.
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Reviewed By: snoopy_23 On: November 14, 2005 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know, my ratings might be kinda not average, but i really liked his story. To me, it's either a hero, or a zero. You have achieved hero status.
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Title: she really does, i'm telling you
Reviewed By: Dana sucks On: November 14, 2005 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good, I love how you write in detail. All i have to say is more more more MORE!!
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Title: ye olde japanese!!
Reviewed By: japanoramic_gal On: November 14, 2005 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was such a great last chapter. I am so eager to find out how naruto and neji got back to the medieval place, and what they are going to do about getting home.
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Title: lovely hott guys
Reviewed By: Miss Anime On: November 14, 2005 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved what you did with the characters Neji and Naruto! They seem to be so hott, and your detailed explanations are the bomb. I could visualise them in my brain. OOOOHH YUMMYY!!! Make more pairings, cause they're reallygood so ar on your story.
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Title: coolio
Reviewed By: Kari Miller On: November 14, 2005 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic was so awesome!! I love how you go into detail about the fights, they're my favourite parts. Lots of stories skip that stuff, but this one is rated X because of the violence, not any dumb sexual scenes. Please, make more!!! even if it's shorter, but more numerous chapters!!
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Reviewed By: lanna On: November 13, 2005 14:49 CST
Comment/Review:
goodgood, look forward to new chapters, keep writing! ......hehe Bob...hehe
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Reviewed By: DragnKnight On: November 02, 2005 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. ^_^ Keep up the great work, I look forward to reading more when I get the chance.
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Reviewed By: lanna On: November 01, 2005 21:29 CST
Comment/Review:
whee second chapter good. ....... THEY HAVE TO FIND HIM. THEY HAAAAAAVE TO... I'm done now. :) write more. ^^
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Reviewed By: lanna On: October 29, 2005 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good, I like it, I reviewed now write more for your poor editor.
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