| "Heading home" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Title: heading home
Reviewed By: sakura hime sama On: January 09, 2006 05:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh ! This is best fanfic ever. i love it . u have the most creative mind ever ! pls update , i cannot wait !
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Reviewed By: Fox-Man On: December 11, 2005 19:07 CST
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I seriously classify this fic as one of the better ones. I applaude your work Daisuke-san. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Oh, plus I noted that you have this on another fan work site. And if my calculations are indeed correct you are sitting at an overall of 61 reviews between the two. That is pretty decient as your story is still rather short.
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Reviewed By: Capital Frog On: December 11, 2005 19:05 CST
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DUDE!!! THIS ROCKS MY SOCKS!!! UPDATE!
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Title: going home
Reviewed By: ozarina of oz On: December 05, 2005 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fanfic is very interesting , when are u going to write the next chapter ? i can't wait !
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Reviewed By: dr mosquito On: December 05, 2005 10:16 CST
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nice fic. Very interesting, I even saved it to my favorites so please update as I look forward to reading more. Is it me or do so many of these reveiws say the same thing. How unoriginal.
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Reviewed By: yaoi fangirl leader On: December 05, 2005 10:15 CST
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I love the pairing setups and I can't wait to see the love blossom. I can tell that Neji likes Naruto ALOT. It's very obvious and I like how you made Naruto's feelings mysterious to the readers. I like how it is obvious Sasuke likes Shikamaru, but he doeesn'y realize it. And I love how Shikamaru is his indifferent lazy self. Can't wait for more yummy yaoi-ness
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Reviewed By: yivmf gf,hg On: December 05, 2005 10:13 CST
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nfdgjshglkh good lkjflizhsflzzhsfl update jdsflkjhsdfkjh soon
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Reviewed By: reviewer2005 On: December 05, 2005 10:11 CST
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I really love the flow of this tale. I hope this story will be extra long. Long ones are interesting to read. So update. I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: sidelong football On: December 05, 2005 10:10 CST
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yo! update
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Reviewed By: amealea On: December 05, 2005 10:10 CST
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Like wow! You should so like update! And like with longer chapters!
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Reviewed By: margaritta vonhule On: December 05, 2005 10:08 CST
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I like it a lot. Do update.
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Reviewed By: bartholomule On: December 05, 2005 10:07 CST
Comment/Review:
good. updat.
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Reviewed By: kakai-sensei luva On: December 05, 2005 10:07 CST
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Whois getting together with Kakashi? And could you hurry up with the Neji Naruto love and the Shikamaru Sasuke love. I wanna see them all together. Will Neji and Naruto get back? I hope so. Afterall all the people's reactions to their return would be so cool. Anyways, update!
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Reviewed By: monologue On: December 05, 2005 10:05 CST
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good. work on spelling and update.
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Reviewed By: bored student On: December 05, 2005 10:03 CST
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I really like this story. It was a good way to spend my advanced classes. They are so borin and I find fanfics are a great way to pass time when I'm too lazy to do my work.
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