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Reviewed By: zoolologist On: December 05, 2005 10:02 CST
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Nice. Please include more detailed descriptions, and also more cool critters. Oh by the way I don't really understand your time passage through both worlds. Is it supposed to be all wonky?
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Reviewed By: proud fangirl On: December 05, 2005 10:00 CST
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WOW!!!!!! This story is GREAT!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON BUT DOn't RUSH YOURSELF I COULD WAIT FOREVER FOR MORE STORY THOUGh I still want an update soon. Im so demanding. DO IT OR ILL LIVE IN YOUR CUPboard
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Reviewed By: jugular golem On: December 05, 2005 09:56 CST
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Good. I like the random bouts of humour thrown into the serious situations, makes it feel like a real anime series, not one that has been modyfied
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Reviewed By: Carolina On: December 05, 2005 09:55 CST
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very good. Update
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Reviewed By: monagonalith On: December 05, 2005 09:55 CST
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Very intresting combination of different genres, very creative and excellent. Please do update
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Reviewed By: heading home fan On: December 05, 2005 09:54 CST
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I am a major fan of all your stories, but this one takes the cake. This is the best one you have ever written and I can't wait to read more so please update and soon.
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Title: da bomb
Reviewed By: Karanithmon On: December 05, 2005 09:51 CST
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^.^ I'm loving it!
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Reviewed By: mark da dud On: December 05, 2005 09:51 CST
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awsum!!1!! Kep ritting!!
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Reviewed By: tutulage On: December 05, 2005 09:49 CST
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Interesting. Needs more work on grammar, but otherwise its pretty good. It is pretty original, and has interesting things in it so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kanna-plopper On: November 25, 2005 08:10 CST
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UPDATE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Typical Blond On: November 23, 2005 12:35 CST
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As awesome as the other chapters, please keep up the good work. You sure have improved your speeling and grammar, do you by chance have an editor. Well I am looking forward to reading more of this so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: nuke-naruto-jk On: November 21, 2005 20:45 CST
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i loved this story, and yeah, you are following the story's characters' personalities quite well. does the bite have anything to do with orochimaru wanting sasuke to be stronger, because i think that's the jist i got (burnt pickle) keep it up!!
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Title: whoo
Reviewed By: yeah-naruto On: November 21, 2005 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your spelling has gotten so much better, you must have an editor!! i loved the story-line, and was wondering, what was with the lady and man in the forest, like, were they of any consequence, and are they coming back or what? just wondering if it was that, or a momentary dirty thought during the writing. loving it so far.
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Title: thanx
Reviewed By: pickles ought to be in a story On: November 21, 2005 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanx so much for adding a pickle into it ma buddy, i like pickles, even if sasuke doesn't, and i love the pairing of lee and sakura, it reminda me of a really good fanart i saw of him once, and he was the same way in your story. please make more!1
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Title: naruto m-azing
Reviewed By: ninja crazzy 23 On: November 21, 2005 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this latest chapter, sorry i didn't review before, but this last bit was so interesting i just had to. i liked how you did the sexy jutsu with naruto. i can just picture his yummy body now!! and yes, i am a girl.
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