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Reviewed By: lanna On: November 13, 2005 14:49 CST
Comment/Review:
goodgood, look forward to new chapters, keep writing! ......hehe Bob...hehe
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Reviewed By: DragnKnight On: November 02, 2005 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. ^_^ Keep up the great work, I look forward to reading more when I get the chance.
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Reviewed By: lanna On: November 01, 2005 21:29 CST
Comment/Review:
whee second chapter good. ....... THEY HAVE TO FIND HIM. THEY HAAAAAAVE TO... I'm done now. :) write more. ^^
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Reviewed By: lanna On: October 29, 2005 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good, I like it, I reviewed now write more for your poor editor.
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