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Reviewed By: pickle_monster On: November 21, 2005 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O man o man, this last chapter was the bomb!! i loved the pickle part, hahah, burning into oblivion. make more...
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Title: thank you for writning this story
Reviewed By: Yui_alexandra On: November 16, 2005 14:38 CST
Comment/Review:
this story is intresting, I find it amusing... and I believe it is original, it is the first time I have read a it Nauto story where the end up in the middle age in brittain. there is only one thing I would like to comment on, I found it sadly a litte boring at times when they were talking/or fighting. to be honset I want the story to focus a little more on Naruto and Neij, conversation between the two of them, how did they get there and so on, bring some more feeligs into the story, (and I personally hope there will be more feeligs between the two of them) . now at the ending of this review I onl want to say, good luck (not that you need it), and please update soon (^_^)/
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: Jonathon12234 On: November 14, 2005 18:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice! Update!
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Title: so detailed
Reviewed By: luving anime fan fics On: November 14, 2005 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! this has got to be one amazing and talented author to have this kind of story, no jokes!! You could almost smell the dirt as they entered the castle area. You could feel the bubbles warmth and cool. The wetness of the puddles and the glare of the fights. You are a very emotional author, and that makes for a wild story! PLease continue to use these abilities to the most you can.
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Title: racoon rabies
Reviewed By: Smurf Butt On: November 14, 2005 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowee! goodo! m-azing! i like m&ms. with cheese whiz! almost as much as i like yur story! heehehhee it was really exciting and worrisome. please!!! i beg of you!!1 morE!! moREEE~~~!!!!
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Title: more on others
Reviewed By: Sasuke luvrr On: November 14, 2005 18:08 CST
Comment/Review:
you need to put in more on the pther characters, they are kinda left out, and i know they're not the main ones, but still some of my favs. Keep writing please. if you do, i'll review.
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Title: nameo
Reviewed By: Nick the name On: November 14, 2005 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! I loved this fanfic!! It was like one of the best I have like ever read!! It's so suspensful, so i won't ruin the plot by saying anymore to the other reviewers and readers. You tell us to review, i tell you to write!!
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Title: Squirrel
Reviewed By: Nibbly Nut On: November 14, 2005 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the only thing wrong with the story is you need to spell check it a bit more. It's not bad at all, but you'll lose rating marks this way. Also, I love the olde japanese, funny joke.
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Reviewed By: Naruto, my hero On: November 14, 2005 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to tell me more!!! i am in such suspense about the voice, and i need to read more, this is just cruel to leave me hanging!!! MAKE MORE PLEASE!!! (L)
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Title: pickled beets
Reviewed By: pickles ought to be in a story On: November 14, 2005 18:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I think you should add in stuff about pickles, because they are so tasty!! Oh, and aout the story, i still don't get how naruto and neji got back, explain more if you weren't planning on it in following chapters.
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Reviewed By: snoopy_23 On: November 14, 2005 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know, my ratings might be kinda not average, but i really liked his story. To me, it's either a hero, or a zero. You have achieved hero status.
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Title: she really does, i'm telling you
Reviewed By: Dana sucks On: November 14, 2005 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good, I love how you write in detail. All i have to say is more more more MORE!!
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Title: ye olde japanese!!
Reviewed By: japanoramic_gal On: November 14, 2005 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was such a great last chapter. I am so eager to find out how naruto and neji got back to the medieval place, and what they are going to do about getting home.
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Title: lovely hott guys
Reviewed By: Miss Anime On: November 14, 2005 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved what you did with the characters Neji and Naruto! They seem to be so hott, and your detailed explanations are the bomb. I could visualise them in my brain. OOOOHH YUMMYY!!! Make more pairings, cause they're reallygood so ar on your story.
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Title: coolio
Reviewed By: Kari Miller On: November 14, 2005 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic was so awesome!! I love how you go into detail about the fights, they're my favourite parts. Lots of stories skip that stuff, but this one is rated X because of the violence, not any dumb sexual scenes. Please, make more!!! even if it's shorter, but more numerous chapters!!
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