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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue please this is very good.
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Reviewed By: shinkamigrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 12:46 CST
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This story is great! You have to write more, your fans request it!
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Title: wicked cool
Reviewed By: knoxvillej05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fic..... i cant wait to see what happens next..... why havent u updated in so long. i really wanna know what happens
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Title: Dream Keeper
Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 13:09 CST
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Oh wow! I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens next! Is Naruto and Neiji ok? Is something going to happen to Sasuke and Shikamaru? 'Cause they're right, the lasr mission did seem too easy for them. Update soon, please? ^_^
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Title: DUDE!!!
Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 06:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE!!! THAT WAS FREAKIN' AWESOME!!! How the Hell did you come up with an idea like THAT?! Even my twisted mind cannot comprehend where this story is going. Please tell me that that's not all of it. Please you HAVE to continue! What happened to Neji and will Naruto be ok? When will those 2 realize that they like eachother? Please continue soon! I am now a forever fan of your work. Arie Date.
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 23:33 CDT
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I like it, but how will the foursome come to be?? I always wanted to read a fic that had Shikamaru in an orgy with Sasuke and Naruto, adding Neji in it just makes it better!! =D Who will weild the sword? I don't think it will be Sasuke becausee his heart and mind is half full of thoughts about revenge and the other about Naruto, Will it be Shikamaru or Naruto??
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 21:39 CDT
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i know that your probably not going to keep doing this work but please pleasee pleaseeeee if you have any time write a chapter pleaseeeee im begging its soooooooooooooooooooooo interesting and my friend is going very weird on me sooo please keep this up and if you have any spare time update this story its soooo good
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Reviewed By: BigSisterOf4 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: RD On: June 24, 2006 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, keep it up, i cant wait to see what happens next
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Title: BaseNIkon
Reviewed By: Kakurot [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
by the gods i beg you to update soon. cheers mate.
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Reviewed By: silversound On: May 27, 2006 21:12 CDT
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please please please please update soon!!!!! pretty please with suger on top?
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Reviewed By: Miststalker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only read the first two chapters and while I enjoy your characters and the proposed story and pairing I cannot get around the bad grammar. This is not intended to be a flame merely to say that your grammar needs a major overhaul as it is hard to enjoy reading a story as I puzzle through the grammar in some areas. Also author's notes should be at the end of the chapter not scattered throughout story as they interrupt the flow. I do however give you kudos for having the guts to post a fic and that is hard for anyone. I'd love to be able to read this story with all the grammar corrected, I hope you'll do so in the future when you have time.
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Reviewed By: Phidias Bagel On: March 02, 2006 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for Updates! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I'm on the edge of my seat with Naruto and Neji's cliff hanger ending. Please Update Soon!
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: warriorkai On: February 08, 2006 22:32 CST
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I rather like this story, it's interesting and the pairing mentioned at the start SasukexNarutoxNejixShikimaru... well that is truly intriguing! Please keep writing and my thanks for writing it in the first place.
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Reviewed By: neosildrake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 07:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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A really really good story. Intriguing, original and easy to read. I like it very much. Also it seems that it will go on for a loooong time, so I do hope you intend to finish it too. Anyway, keep us happy and update!
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