| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 08:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so nice!! I love the descriptions you use, they leave just enough to the imagination and tell you everything you need to know all at once! Once again awesome job and please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My friend that's staying with me always knows when you update when I open my email because I howl like a little monkey. (Those were her words, not mine.) I know I've left you reviews before, but just to let you know how much I love you, my friend wanted to read your stuff, but won't because the computer hurts her eyes. (Whine, whine.) So, I am actually going to read the Purity series to her. Out loud. Which is insane, but oh well. And hopefully, then she'll read Chronicles, and Torrent, and all the others, because there's not a single one I don't love. You rock my socks.
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Title: smiles :)
Reviewed By: hanyouwings [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 00:54 CST
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Okay, first of all, I totally have to agree with Syd on the whole jumping thing...I mean...d-a-a-a-mn! Yah, anyway, sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile (smiles sheepishly), but I've still been reading your stories religiously! Speaking of which, I had a really depressing thought the other day. I know you said you are going to write 11 Purities (which I worship you for...seriously :). I also know it will be a long time before they are all finished,but what am I going to do when I don't have your stories to look forward to every day? I will be lost Sue...I mean it. I'm going to cry, get depressed, eat a whole lot...cry some more...just the thought of it makes me sad. I know there are other very talented writers, but there aren't any like you. You are sweet, sensitive, brilliant, amazing, and I know I don't actually know you personally, but I've read your stories so long it kind of feels like it. So when I think of not being able to read your stories, it's like I'm losing a best friend I've had for years. Of course, I know you'll still be writing Purities for awhile, but like I said it was just a thought which made me want to write this review to tell you how much you are appreciated and cared about. Anyway, live happy Sue!!! Ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: animeloca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, again I am so happy you updated so soon. I was not expecting another update after reading all of Torrent. I love your writing and again I am so addicted to your writing. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 22:21 CST
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aww! yey for his barber shop pole!! lol!! poor guy. i'd be the reason he has a complex. but i'm glad syd didn't laugh! she has *just* the right reaction. ;) great chapter!! loved it! i'm so glad he's got that off his chest! but he still needs to tell her bout his papa. although she already has her suspisions..
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 20:35 CST
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Oh wow. I love the development, the intamacy. Bas and Sydnie are just beautiful together. She's just what he needs and Bas, he tempers her I think. They're amazing together. So is it Ryo or Inuyasha trailing and protecting them from a distance? ~Curiosity kills cats everywhere, I just happen to be one of the lucky ones. ^_~
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 19:32 CST
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It is really funny how excited I get whenever I see an email saying that you have updated a story. *sigh* Thank you for giving me something to look forward to!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 19:02 CST
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Aww...how cute...I feel sorry for Bas, although I did laugh lol...I knew Sydnie wouldn't mind though. Hmm...I wonder if they'll play this game again; and I hope she heard him call her his mate lol; by the way that you said she smiled, I take it she did lol.
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: Inu_sesshomaru_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he forgot her for a football game thats just wrong lol any way i love this story so keep writing
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Title: At least he's a Patriot Fan!
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...poor Sydnie! Getting pushed to the side for football sucks! At least Gunsie has the heart to get her milk....jk, anyway, I wonder who won the game. LoL Great chapter! ~Kim~
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful Chapter! Cant wait for the next. o.o but I keep wondering... when are we going to find out who Gin sent to follow them. I keep thinking its Ryomaru and then I think ooo could it be Inuyasha?
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Reviewed By: Shikon no Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 22:40 CST
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That was great! A plague on football and those who yell at the TV (it's not a two-way communication device. the little people on the other side can't hear you.) Was this written as a hint to your husband? I can't hear myself think during football season; Sydnie seemed to deal with it quite well though, only lonely and disappointed. At least she didn't run off, he might even have risked going after her during a commercial break. Keep updating, I love these stories and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Are you going to finish Phantasm before Torrent?
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 19:56 CST
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lol!! oh bas. ;) that was pretty hilarious, but come on! what about having a christmas for your mate? damn! you're gonna have to make it up to her now!
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Reviewed By: animeloca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Funny about the handcuffs! I am so addicted to your writing. Wonderful!
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