| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really sweet chapter!! Please keep them coming!!
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Title: Milk and Honey
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 08:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya Sue: I hope you had an Awesome Valentine's Day! This chapter is very charming and sweet. It put me in a really good mood. Thank you. Take care.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 04:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 21:52 CST
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Ouch...poor kitty! And Bas feels really bad about it to. I know he'll make up for it! I wonder when the hunters are going to show up, before, during, or after their stay in Chicago. Hmmm. Something to think about....good chapter, love the whole dairy farm thing! ~Kim~
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading but I haven't had a chance to review! This is my fav Purity so far! You just keep topping yourself!
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Reviewed By: ColShaLin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 15:54 CST
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Because of YOU I have really overused the Ctrl-Refresh technique. I keep hoping I can magically make another one of your chapters appear whenever I want it. That was absolutely too sweet, thank you for sharing!
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 15:36 CST
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LOL!! that was akward sex!! lol!! poor bas! he'll get it right! maybe he just needs some advice. ;) and yey for the cows!! my cows are ...hamburger cows... so i'm not much up on the dairy stuff... but i do know it smells. lol, but bas and syd don't seem to mind much. ;) and the stinch of cow should cover up their tracks from the onyx quite nicely! great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 10:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very entertaining!! I'd have to say that sydnie did that to herself. What in the hell was she thinking? But then when you have two inexperienced people, any thing can happen!! Great Chapter
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 07:55 CST
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Ouch, hopefully in the next chapter they will go about it right. Gunnar should have told him what to do.
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 00:50 CST
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LMAO!!! nice chapter, i can\'t imagine what sort of twists you can throw in there having to do with sex, especially when I\'ve read Metamorphosis. lol I know you can have a pretty interesting imagination...lol. update real soon plz. Ja ne
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Title: not good!
Reviewed By: Spygirl3034 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that bleeding is not a good sign, my friend has this thing(forgot wut its called)but she canht have babies. and she ound out cuz on her 1st time she bleed about as much as kitty did ad she said it hurt ALOT so she went to the doc and they told her she ccant hav babies so now she has to take bith controle bcuz they help even out her .\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s. u wont d that to kitty and bas would u?...would u?...
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 23:55 CST
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BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN SUE!! ARIGATO FOR GIVING US THIS ONE!!!!!!! Aw, he's worried about her; I would be too though, but it's still so sweet!!!! Hmm...so they know the name of the bangster who's after Sydnie and Bas; how long before they figure out where the bangster is so they can borrow Tetsusaiga and do some shoving? lol.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 23:40 CST
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ambitious considering how shy he is! LOL - WHoa, 8 hunters...Overkill...hopefully empasis on the over and not the kill, I mean they've found each other. Syd's had a really harsh life...that would be just cruel to snatch happiness away so soon. I'm still waiting to see who the reinforcer is. Hehehehe
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Title: Great shap
Reviewed By: 1Inuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved It much u r truly the best sue Yay GO SUERIC Woowhoo
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