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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 22:56 CST
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syd's still a virgin?! wow! okay so the question now is how did she get the one up on cal if it wasn't due to sex induced laziness? great chemistry and chapters!
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Title: Moshie Moshie
Reviewed By: ErinBerin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 22:31 CST
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Dearest, most prolific Sueric: You know I love your writing, it inspires me in so many ways. In fact, I think I shall start answering my phone calls with "Moshie moshie." You are a genius in every sense of the word... and so are the Japanese. Love, Berin. P.S. I lurve where the story is going. LoL
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 22:06 CST
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Eight hunters? Uh oh... o_o And Sydnie is still a virgin? You know... Oddly... That doesn't surprise me. I mean, it's not like I was expecting it... But... I'm not shocked either. XD Does that make sense? I hope so. Anyway, thank you for the update. It was great, as always. Happy Valentine's Day!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 21:42 CST
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so...i was so confused on the reference to belle that i actually attempted to draw out a family tree...that was until i figured out that she was Kich's daughter. but you should see the tree (no doubt you've already drawn one)...it's quite...errr...tangeled? LOL. great story though. at least Jeb realizes that if he screws with Bas, he's screwing with some of the major powers of the world. (to bad i know that won't deter an angry parent). it's really sad, ya know...i feel for the guy. both parties are doing their job (though Jeb IS doing his dirty) but it's still angsty. ::sigh::: i guess our party who is following Bas shall be rearing their head soon, ne? if eight men are gonna attack this poor kid...he's gonna need serious backup. ^__^ way to go, Sueric...another great story!
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Title: HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!!
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the chapter! What a wonderful Valentines Gift! It was amazing, and confusing all at the same time. For about 2 or 3 paragraphs I thought that Bas had called his sister Belle, so when you said she was his cousin/niece, I was like, No shes not, but then you said it was Bitty Belle, Belles daughter, which made me feel dumb for thinking about it so much! Also, I fear for Bas and Sydnie because of the 8 hunters coming after them, but I suppoese thats when the the one following them will come in handy (cough*INUYASHA*cough)! Well, anyways, I loved it, and HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! ~Kim~
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Title: Greatness!
Reviewed By: Angelswrath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 21:38 CST
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Amazing chapters Sue!! Can't wait for the next! And the thing with Sydnie at the end! Whoa. Never would have thought that! Your descritption is awesome and I keep falling in love with all of your characters. I wonder how they're gonna handle eight youkai hunters. I mean Bas is the man, but. . . I'm on the edge of my seat! :)
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Title: A Question...
Reviewed By: concreteangel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect chapter, as always!! anyway, when is this "mystery man" Gin sant in gonna show up? The excitement in the story is killing me!! Keep writing!! I dunno what i would do without your stories!! (probably be bored as hell). Happy Writing! ~concreteangel
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 19:28 CST
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Agh...now I have to scroll up to catch up with the chat lol....Hmm, well it's good that one thing was kinda solved. Eight hunters, though, holy crap man! Can't wait for the action on that chapter lol.
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Title: I caught up, made it to ch. 30 at last!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 17:58 CST
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Whew! That last chappie was some hot stuff. Is it just me, or is Bas and Sydnie just the cutest things together? She's so fierce, posessive just like a cat. LoL And the Football game incident...ugh! I've catered to a few Super Bowl games...try the yelling at the screen with 3 or more men, not just one...and hearing your neighbors rooting for the other team through the windows....hillarious! If I never see another crockpot filled with barbecue sauce and little smokies...it'll be too soon. And the Catnip? Wheeeeeeeeeee! Talk about having your hands full. Too much fun. --- I will try harder to keep up from now on...even if I have to lock my roomie in his room! XD
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Reviewed By: Spygirl3034 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
to think ive been reading ur Fics since the 1st Purity and i never commented, wow, u rock!!! ur almost as god as ingrrl(she kicks ass!) lol, lat time i read #5 it waz at the part where bas and "kitty" where just getting to nkow eatch other and now shes giving him head!! can u say big ass diff!!, anywhore keep up the VERY good work, bye!
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 21:49 CST
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Wow... This chapter actually made me kind of sad. It's horrible that Bas was made to think that he was a freak and a monster because of that. Thank the gods Sydnie is there to tell him otherwise. Wonderful, Sue. Really.
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Title: GREEN ;-)
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So she likes his crests huh. Well of course she would!I just can't believe poor Bas got laughed at! Personally, I don't think I would have laughed, just stood there staring, kind of shocked. lol Loved the chapter, can't wait for the next one! ~Kim~
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Title: Implicit Trust
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you write your limes and lemons in your stories. Just beautiful writing at its best. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 13:22 CST
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another great chapter update soon plz ^^ Ja ne
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