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Title: Ch 1-19 - I finally found me time to R&R!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 17:13 CST
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Ok...I love it! (big surprise, lol) Bas - Even though this is his first assignment as a Hunter, he's coming across as capable, decisive (Hunky!) and adorably bashful. Sydnie - While obviously deeply scarred, her playfulness is refreshing and the way she flips from cynical disgust, innocent awe, and almost preditorially sexual is keeping Bas flustered and off balance. Distracted? That's putting it mildly. She's also left wondering in the wake of his seemingly tender care of her. She doesn't know what to make of it...or him. Unfortunately, their situation makes for some rough altercations between them and isn't helping the desperate need for trust. Her life has been isolation, voilence and survival driven by revenge, and she seems apathetic about her own future beyond that goal. Whereas Bas has had a life of love and security. She must be very alien to him, a trembling mystery that has him captivated. Cain wants him to find out why she killed Richardson, but Bas wants to find out for himself, for his own peace of mind...and maybe so he'll know whose heads he needs to bash! - The phone call from Gunnar that Syd answered had me rolling! OMG!! Pictures!! I can't believe he sold it to Evan! Although, I totally believe that Evan bought it; he's such a hound. *woof*
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 15:09 CST
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Awww...poor Jillian! Hmm...I wonder how long it will take Sydnie to realize that Bas is her mate lol. This chapter was really cute!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 13:43 CST
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ohhh!! too cute! gunnar's human night too! and i'm glad bas is realizing his feelings for her!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: katgirlofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, new chapter! I love how Sydnie reacted to Gunner as a human. So he IS Toga and Sierra's son. Since he looks like Sierra and all... And the food catching thing resurfaces! *laughs* I love the resemblance between Bas and Ryomaru. Almost all the scenes with Bas and Sydnie are so sweet! The purring was so nice. So how long will it be till he tells her she's his mate? Can't wait for that chapter. Thanks so much for posting!!! ~Kat
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 09:06 CST
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This chapter was so amazingly cute. I loved it when Sydnie started kneading the bed. She reminds me of my cat... *laughs* Anyway, excellent chapter. Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 08:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the last chapter wouldn't let me review. Anyway great chapter!! So Bas has accepted the fact that she's his mate, man I wonder what Cain and Gin are going to say? And when will Sydnie realize? Anyway as usual great work!!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great updates gtg have a happy january
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 12:15 CST
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great chapter! and lol! i'm glad you feel the same about random words... like boobies...or jubblies. hehe... anyhow, i can't wait till gunnar gets to fight!!!! :O i wanna see what he's got! ;)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 03:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Ayita [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 21:38 CST
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I love it. Your characters are so beautiful and unique. It's just a joy to read your stories.
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, just to clear my mind, Gunner is Toga and Sirra's kid right?
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 15:07 CST
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Oh crap, Jeb knows....that's not good. Hmm...I take it that after he watches the video a few more times that he'll send more hunters? I hope Bas is better by that time.
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 14:47 CST
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Thank you so much for posting this chapter, Sue!! It really made my day, seeing as how I'm home sick and feeling like a mess. X3 Oh, and can I just say really quick that I absolutely [i]adore[/i] Gunnar? He's wonderful!! So, once again, thank you for updating!
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Reviewed By: animeloca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful again. I shall never tire of your writing. Bas is awesome. Your character development is perfect. I can literally see the characters you created- you bring them to life so well. Please continue.
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