| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 10:32 CST
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Oooh... things are getting steamy. XD I wonder what Sydnie will do when she finds out that Bas doesn't have a girlfriend? Great chapter. Thanks for updating. ^_^
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Title: finally!!
Reviewed By: akashadair [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im finally able to review again!! i am overjoyed as usual with your latest stories!! ive kept up since you left fanfiction.net but mediaminer has thus far refused to let me review even if im signed in! but today its working i guess! brava you should take a bow you are amazing!
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Title: yowza
Reviewed By: NateGrey On: December 08, 2005 12:30 CST
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I hate to say it, but some people/youkai actually MIGHT be better off if they just got it over with and had sex. Of course, that would make for short stories, and nobody wants THAT. Poor Bas...maybe he should buy a rubber mouse and try to distract Sydnie. Although if this chapter is any indication, maybe a puppy plushie would work better. I just really hope Bas learns to take Sydnie seriously soon, if for no other reason than to protect his virtue. Because that's starting to look like a lost cause, frankly. There are worse ways to lose a fight, I suppose, but I'm guessing Bas would be too ashamed to really enjoy it. He could've at least made up a girl that isn't supposed to be so...fragrant.
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Title: I love this
Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 02:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfics!! I bet that if you made a book, i'd buy it. I'm so happy that you started Purity 5. I've read the other four and they were awesome. I wish I had your writing ability. YOu have away of writing that lets your readers see the characters. I wish I had that. Well, until my next review. CIAO!! Ja Ne!! and Seeya!!
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Reviewed By: ::Rawben:: On: December 07, 2005 23:19 CST
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LOL!!!!!!!!!!! A SKUNK?? ohh bas... what were you thinking... syd doesn't actually believe that does she? cause if she does... she's gonna be pissed to find out that he lied to her... ;) ouch... and lol!!!!! she walked in on him??? this is my fav chapter so far!! hilarious!!! and daaamn! *whistles* helloooo bas. ;)
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Title: Battle Lines
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the awesome update today! I love the tension between Bas and Sydnie. Thank you again and take care.
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Reviewed By: katgirlofthenight (not signed in) On: December 07, 2005 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*falls over laughing* That was INCREDIBLE! Sydnie going into the bathroom and pulling back the curtain, and Bas freaking out!!! And the licking... very nice. Ah... sexual tension is a wonderful thing. Fantastic chapter, and thank you for posting!!! ~Kat
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 21:46 CST
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I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!! Oh, I love how she's teasing him!! I think this is going to be my favorite Purity!! I love her comment about if it looks like a skunk, smells like one, then it must be one!! Oh too good!!! KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 21:43 CST
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Haha that was a great chapter... can't wait to see what happens next with Bas and Syd. They are so hillarious. Great work on this story... I get so excited when I get an update notice.
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Reviewed By: inuyoukaimama *(nsi) On: December 07, 2005 20:17 CST
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Yea! another fabulous chapter. Poor Bas! So unsuspecting. His shoe... LOL. *sigh* It was great Sue. Soooooo glad the tree is up! Good!
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Reviewed By: kestral-tudorica On: December 07, 2005 01:30 CST
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Tannenbaum? Anyways, I'm glad that posting is a cheering task now :) I definitely enjoyed it. :-p They bitch a lot don't they? I suppose Bas's use of 'bitch' is strictly in the offensive sense? I don't recall if you used it like a reference to a female before for inuyasha. Anyways, loved the chapter as alwasy ^_^ I actually really like this story. It's something new.
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Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 21:42 CST
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LMAO...Honestly...I love when you make up words. Assitude...BAHHAHAHAHHAHAHA Personally--I think my favorite was when you tried to get me to use some GOD AWFUL word...like Horrificalifious...yeah...that's close enough. LOL. I adore Bas and Sydnie, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And so the plot thickens...Sydnie comment, "He did nothing!" That makes me wonder...I already have an idea about what Cal the ass did to her, but as for cain I think it's exactly what she said, "He did nothing!" Anyway I can't wait until it all comes out. keep it going Sue!!
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Reviewed By: InuFan9003 On: December 06, 2005 16:28 CST
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*falls out of chair laughing* oh god!! This was so funny please update sonn Sue
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 15:29 CST
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Well, I hope posting it did make you happy, 'cause it sure made me happy!! I knew we'd see those handcuffs again. Hmm...about Cain doing nothing gives me the impression that maybe something happened to her that could have been prevented, but it wasn't. Well, I'm off to read Torrent now haha!!
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