| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: TheGreatMinionRalph [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 21:13 CST
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Ooh... So very dark and mysterious... I'm liking this! I cant wait for the next update! Kit seems so... Jaded, I can't wait to see her charecter develop more. see ya next review!
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Reviewed By: Star-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 19:49 CST
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LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon and are the other ppl kids gonna be in this?
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Reviewed By: Hikaru1617 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 10:22 CST
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OOohhhhhh....this one catched me right up. I like how you are putting together all these different things into one amazing story. Already I'm trying to figure out what the heck she's up to...and how Bas will take her down..or if he will! :P AWESOME!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 08:51 CST
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Poor girl. She sounds like the kind of person you just want to protect. Murderer or not, something's tearing that girl down and its no hunter.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 21:48 CST
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Love this mysterious plot...these are my favorite type of stories, besides angst and romance that it! Poor Bas, he's having a rough night! Haha!!
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i find it a little weird that you should put out another sequel without finishing that last story. pur4. i'm still waiting to see what happens with belle and kich and what will happen when gins family comes to visit. but i get an email saying that pur5 has been updated and the number 5 hadnt registered so i thought 'oh good she updated pur4', but to my surprise its this. and now i know gin and cain have 3 kids. okay that swell. but damn now i just need to fill in the missing parts for pur4. oh well i'm still waiting. your story pur5 is captivating nontheless and i look forward to reading more of it, hopefully you hurry and finish pur4 soon. cant wait. :)
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 15:33 CST
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Yay!! I'm so excited!! Phantasm has arrived and it's already off to an amazing start. ^_^ I wondered who it would be centered around... I'm glad you chose Cain & Gin's son. Can't wait for the next update, Sue. Thanks for this one.
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Reviewed By: Miryokuteki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 14:47 CST
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I thought you weren't doing anymore Purity's. I so happy though. I love all of them.
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Title: Chapter II
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 12:41 CST
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This chapter is amazing! I'm a little surprised to see their first encounter so soon, but it is definitely great. The bartender is hilarious. It was cool that she knew who he was right from the get-go, but it took him so long to believe her. She even spared his life--she's a good girl at heart. I can't wait until the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 11:15 CST
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ohhh! she's awesome. totally kicked his ass. haha! man, but i really want to know what happened to her that made her so ...dark. cal must have killed her family or something. *shudder* or raped her... ew... anyhow, great chapter! i hope syd can eat soon... ugh. that's how they should interrogate her! here's some food, but you dont get it till you tell us what happened! muhahaha! ;)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 10:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woo hoo! a new chapter gata love the update system
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Title: The Next Generation of Hunters
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 09:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool update! I can't wait to see more of Kit and Bas and the other characters as the story developes. It's still hard to believe that your story is fanfiction. The passion and the characters in your writing makes me believe otherwise. Thank you for the fast update! Your fan, Christal
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 16:18 CST
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You mean we get to do this one more time? YES! You're the best! I was getting so worried with Justification winding down, and because it was so much longer than the previous few, in the dark recesses of my mind I was starting to think you just wanted to go out with a bang. I'm so estatic that there'll be at least one more! I like the title. Reminds me of Batman. The first chapter is promising, as always. I like Bas's character so far. The time gap between stories sent me reeling. I can't wait to get to this one!
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Title: Rejoice
Reviewed By: darkfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that I am immensely happy that you've decided to write another Purity fic. I only ran across your fics a couple of weeks ago and have since read everything you've posted. I've never found a writer with such an ability to write engrossing storylines with such believeable characters. Your Purity series in particular has practically passed into the realm of canon in my mind--I keep forgetting that the Purity series is fan written. I guess that just illustrates how in character I think your depictions of the original characters are. Many thanks for the continued effort and don't let anyone tell you that your writing is anything less than masterful.
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