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"A Star to Steer By" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ]
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 Reviewed By: mm-c  On: March 03, 2006 21:49 CST
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i feel so sorry for poor yotan, he's in a tight spot...going against the king...
 Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi  On: March 03, 2006 21:15 CST
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Marvelous as always, darling. Very interested to see what will happen next on this little voyage.
 Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 03, 2006 20:59 CST
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This chapter makes me a little sad. It's nice that Ran is watching out for Yohji, both physically and psychologically, but there is still so much distance between them. If Yohji has to be grateful for the fog to shield himself from Ran's actions, what hope can he have that they'd ever come to truly see and accept one another? I'm anxious to see where this goes and how this particular issue is addressed and resolved! I do so love this story! (And it's writer!)
 Reviewed By: red queen  On: March 03, 2006 20:55 CST
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awww, farf and aya leaping together into vicious bloody slaughter...kissing madly over the carnage, blood-slick hands sliding into each other's... oh, that wasn't in there, was it? hee... i loved aya sticking his wood on yohji's bum. and what is stairs' deal? does he just like to toy with people, or is he just a nutter? or both? all the navigating info was interesting, too. great chapter, if a liiiiiittle short.
 Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 01, 2006 05:46 CST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Wow, great plot. Aya and Yohji are terribly in character. I liked the bit about Yohji being an 8 year old wastrel rogue. Brilliant dialogue!
 Reviewed By: red queen  On: February 23, 2006 01:31 CST
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awww, farf tore up the minstrel? did he play too many of bilbo baggins' favorite walking tunes? (er...that's sort of an inside joke...never mind) heh, aya IS a pretty redheaded 'piece'... more, please. i like pirates.
 Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi  On: February 19, 2006 19:24 CST
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Oooooh. Yohji should KNOW better than to even think things like that. Yeesh! Spifftacular as always, love.
 Title: Whoohoo!
Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2006 19:13 CST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I was gonna start begging for this update but too late! : ) Awesome as always KD! Hehehe he doesn't need to sleep... Man, I am still catching my breath from that hamber pot line - classic. BTW Bob is being ressurected by my dad - well trying to be.
 Reviewed By: mm-c  On: February 19, 2006 12:57 CST
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yay! a chappie for me! so when do i get another update? *ow* my muse just slapped me on the head and told me not to be ungrateful *pouts* but I want to find out what happens....yay! but I enjoyed it though snoopy yohji *snicker* hehe my 2nd spam code is mrcy (mercy)...of course my third one was of no significance
 Reviewed By: soxy  On: February 19, 2006 12:33 CST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh I just love this story... I just can't get over the fact that you turned my favorite boys into pirates, and I love pirates Yea! Aww my poor little Aya though, he is just so abused ::cuddles him:: Well I can't wait to read more so Update Soon!
 Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2006 11:53 CST
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"Pirate mommy." I like it. For Yohji's sake, I do hope that his tomorrow is better, but that's probably too much to wish for, huh? Another enjoyable chapter. Nice chance to see Yohji being resourceful and not an "typical idiot lordling." Can't wait for more!
 Reviewed By: Dark Moggie [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 16, 2006 02:42 CST
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An Au in the pirate era is something to celebrate. Ran wearing pirate's clothing... yummie! Even the his cold attitude will compliment his look.And Yohji as a nobleman is something to look out and the Farf is sickly cute too. Want more!
 Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2006 12:00 CST
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Well, I still love you. I just hope that Yohji escapes the foul Captain Stairs... With Ran, of course. ^_~ Oh, and the Farf? Yeah, I loved the Farf. Good job.
 Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2006 02:56 CST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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still love you most certanly! *hug* glad you updated!! why must ran always get abused!? why!! okay, so i do it too, but still. poor him! the captians gonna die right? coz' tha'd be sweet. anyways, could you put in some translations for other languages that you use? i could understand most, but some i didn't. update soon again!! =^^=
 Reviewed By: soxy  On: January 15, 2006 02:18 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Yes, yes, of course I love you now write more!!! Ekk and he touched my Ranny poo and my Yohji poo too doulble ekk! I can't wait to see what happens next. I demand an Update soon! ok well actually I'm begging for one but whatever works ::puppy dog eyes::
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