| "A Star to Steer By" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Reviewed By: red-queen On: November 21, 2005 05:24 CST
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*sparkly eyes* oooo...pretty swordfight... "lower a boat! farfie's got us dinner!" heeheeheeee!!!! farf's a special kinda guy... i'm curious as to whether ran will actually take yohji to bed, or just leave him tied up and frustrated while he crochets mittens for his sister or something. oh, the suspense...
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 18:15 CST
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Poor Yohji! Only he could manage to get into trouble while bound and gagged! But isn't that why we love him? A rousing swordfight, well written, good imagery. Can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As my nephew would say spifftacular!
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Reviewed By: Schmetterling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 07:37 CST
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Yep . Now i am hooked . You should definitely continue this *hint hint*
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Reviewed By: Rhosyn Du On: November 14, 2005 17:56 CST
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Mmm . . . pirate!Aya and a tied up Yohji. This has definitely got potential. :D
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Reviewed By: Graveyard man On: November 14, 2005 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats all I have to say.
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Reviewed By: soxy On: November 13, 2005 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Arrr I need some swashbuckling and fighting! You have to Update Soon!!! this is too interesting to leave hanging please, look you made me beg. Can't wait for more, but I know I'll have more soon... right?
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Reviewed By: red-queen On: November 13, 2005 21:22 CST
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i'll squee in just a moment, but first...farfarello "winked"? Did he made exaggerated facial gestures to let yohji know that's what he was doing? ok, now SQUEE!!! seductive!farf! grog, poofy shirts and silly hats...scurvy...rats...insane peg-legged captains ...pirates are so great
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 21:05 CST
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Ye did a fine job there, lassie. I tips me hat to ye!
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Reviewed By: Lodrelhai On: November 13, 2005 19:48 CST
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You are EVIL. It is completely unfair to leave us on a cliffhanger like that, especially considering what you did in Shades and Hues. ::is going to be haunted by the Aya/Brad tention from there for a long long time::
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Reviewed By: RaceN.S.I. On: November 13, 2005 18:49 CST
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mmm... Yohji as the prize just did it for me. Naturally, I need more... much more. I love you putting Farfie in. Is the Captain Crawford? Then he must already have a redhead chained to his bed... I liked Yohji's pessimistic waffling a lot.
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Reviewed By: Ann99 On: November 13, 2005 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love it already!!!! Please continue Who is the captiain anyway?
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Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 18:32 CST
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"come and take me." Now that's not a fair place to stop...*g* Looking forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 18:24 CST
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What a wonderful opening! Excellent as always! I can't wait to read more. Thanks for not making us wait!
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Title: ahoy there
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 18:12 CST
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needless to say i had to go looking for this fic...sigh anyway i know it's just begun....but you have to update :)
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