| "A Star to Steer By" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Reviewed By: potatofreak [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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more plz!!!! and add some more bondage in XD~ im so pervy.....
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Reviewed By: soxy On: November 28, 2005 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Now that was funny, unfortunitely I don't have much time to review but great job so far please Update Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: November 23, 2005 20:02 CST
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hahahha nice trick yohji!!
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Title: you know it's a good fic when...
Reviewed By: mm-c On: November 21, 2005 23:33 CST
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...everyone's fighting for yohji's ahem butt
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Reviewed By: Graveyard man On: November 21, 2005 14:09 CST
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Lower a boat!" someone shouted. "Farfie got us dinner!" I laughed my a$$ off there, gods, this was a very funny chapter, as well as a good fightscene. Better then I can do atleast. And the many mental quips by Youhji were done well, and were also funny. Mama, were do little pirates come from? LOL. Kudos
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Reviewed By: red-queen On: November 21, 2005 05:24 CST
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*sparkly eyes* oooo...pretty swordfight... "lower a boat! farfie's got us dinner!" heeheeheeee!!!! farf's a special kinda guy... i'm curious as to whether ran will actually take yohji to bed, or just leave him tied up and frustrated while he crochets mittens for his sister or something. oh, the suspense...
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 18:15 CST
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Poor Yohji! Only he could manage to get into trouble while bound and gagged! But isn't that why we love him? A rousing swordfight, well written, good imagery. Can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As my nephew would say spifftacular!
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Reviewed By: Schmetterling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 07:37 CST
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Yep . Now i am hooked . You should definitely continue this *hint hint*
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Reviewed By: Rhosyn Du On: November 14, 2005 17:56 CST
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Mmm . . . pirate!Aya and a tied up Yohji. This has definitely got potential. :D
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Reviewed By: Graveyard man On: November 14, 2005 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats all I have to say.
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Reviewed By: soxy On: November 13, 2005 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Arrr I need some swashbuckling and fighting! You have to Update Soon!!! this is too interesting to leave hanging please, look you made me beg. Can't wait for more, but I know I'll have more soon... right?
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Reviewed By: red-queen On: November 13, 2005 21:22 CST
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i'll squee in just a moment, but first...farfarello "winked"? Did he made exaggerated facial gestures to let yohji know that's what he was doing? ok, now SQUEE!!! seductive!farf! grog, poofy shirts and silly hats...scurvy...rats...insane peg-legged captains ...pirates are so great
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 21:05 CST
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Ye did a fine job there, lassie. I tips me hat to ye!
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Reviewed By: Lodrelhai On: November 13, 2005 19:48 CST
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You are EVIL. It is completely unfair to leave us on a cliffhanger like that, especially considering what you did in Shades and Hues. ::is going to be haunted by the Aya/Brad tention from there for a long long time::
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