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Reviewed By: Jesslin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
They passed a fish-scented Farfarello in the corridor. He snatched one of Ran's badly-tied bandages and darted away laughing. "What's wrong with him?" Yohji asked. "Used to be a pearl diver," a passing sailor answered. Because, of course, Ran didn't. "We think he stayed under too long." I nearly snorted coffee out my nose. I'm not usually a fan of AU, but so far this is a fun ride. Hope you have the oppoprtunity to continue. Thanks forj the fun!
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Reviewed By: Kikvws On: January 09, 2006 17:57 CST
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Also loving this AU! You do such a brilliant job writing Aya, all of his little ideosyncs make him such a lovely enigma. More please!
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Title: LMAO
Reviewed By: Miss Macabre : p On: January 03, 2006 06:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh gods...lol he stayed under too long. That was excellent as always...now get to updating! Pleeease! *Gets on knees and does best chibi impersonation*
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! muwahahahahaha!! thats AWESOME!! you must write more you beautiful writer X3 *gives u hugs* classic, everyone wants yotan mehehehe. *gives you cookies* so...when do we get to see some beautiful man on man...with yxa of course =^~=
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Reviewed By: soxy On: December 28, 2005 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Lovely work, I can't wait for the next part. I would say more but I have to hurry up and go so toddles!
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Reviewed By: Bly-Bly On: December 28, 2005 09:01 CST
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*sigh* I've decided that sea air has done nothing for Ran's disposition if even dear Yohji's dexterous fingers don't get some reaction from him! I look forward to more and hope that Yohji gets a chance to prove he's not stupid and useless as Ran apparently believes. You know we're never going to let you work on anything except this and Hits now that Shades is done, right? Sorry. *hugs*
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Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 07:18 CST
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bloody whore-son Can't wait to hear the background story on that. So glad you updated instead of letting some idiot's fanfic rec distract you. ::grin::
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: December 27, 2005 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hmmm getting more and more interesting
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 23:19 CST
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Woohoo! Thank you, thank you, thank you. Gods I just love this piece. Er, story. Too perfect. Thanks again. You made my evening so much better than the rest of the day.
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Title: lots of love
Reviewed By: Miss Macabre : p On: December 25, 2005 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Update! *begs on hands and knees!* This story is so cool...Farfie got us dinner! LOL *Leaves offering of giant tub of cookie dough Ice cream* Type faster!!
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Reviewed By: potatofreak [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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more plz!!!! and add some more bondage in XD~ im so pervy.....
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Reviewed By: soxy On: November 28, 2005 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Now that was funny, unfortunitely I don't have much time to review but great job so far please Update Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: November 23, 2005 20:02 CST
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hahahha nice trick yohji!!
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Title: you know it's a good fic when...
Reviewed By: mm-c On: November 21, 2005 23:33 CST
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...everyone's fighting for yohji's ahem butt
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Reviewed By: Graveyard man On: November 21, 2005 14:09 CST
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Lower a boat!" someone shouted. "Farfie got us dinner!" I laughed my a$$ off there, gods, this was a very funny chapter, as well as a good fightscene. Better then I can do atleast. And the many mental quips by Youhji were done well, and were also funny. Mama, were do little pirates come from? LOL. Kudos
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