| "Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 207 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bluesavorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved the story. You've just got to update. Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update now!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: adall On: April 19, 2006 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story but why is Kag angry and hate Inu. and how is it the miroko still alive after 500 years. please take time to explain this in your story cause it is a bit confusing. thanks
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Reviewed By: Lady Ring On: April 19, 2006 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE FOR TOO LONG! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I'LL DIE IF I CAN'T READ MORE!! *ahem* sorry, hehe, i tend to over react...It's just that I was waiting for practically the whole story to see what happens when they meet again and just as they do, I find no next chapter!! This really is a great story and I hope you continue it soon.
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Reviewed By: Kagome-sama9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You better get that next chapter in, bitch. *Sorry for rude language. i talk like that* ^^
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Reviewed By: Cricket42(to lazy to sign back in) On: April 19, 2006 18:50 CDT
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write more i about screamed wtf is wrong with you no stopping when the see each other. ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: lilbabybee On: April 19, 2006 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story! I really enjoy your writing. I think you might want to tighten up your grammar/ spelling. Other than that, it's good. I think this is the most original story idea I've read so far. It is a bit of a stretch to imagine that sort of ending, but I buy it. Again, this is really good. Can't wait to read more!
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Title: HOLEY CRAP
Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG IT WAS THE B.E.S.T!!! FINALLY!!! it was taling a long time for him to find her, keep it up! update!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omgosh!! This is amazing! I HAVE to know what happens!! When will Inuyasha and Kagome meet and what exactly happened in the past? This is excellent! I can't want to read more!! I hope you update soon!!
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing(not signed in) On: April 19, 2006 17:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
bah, too lazy to sign in.... YOU! YES YOU, STAND STILL LADEH! (haha, lame music quotes) BUT BESIDES THAT!!! YOU NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED TO UPDATE!!! now, if you recall with all of my other reviews, you'd see that i wasn't the begging time, just a simple and or polite "plz review".. but now... it's different... YA HEAR?! YEAH! THAT'S RIGHT! GET TYPIN' OL BEAN!!!
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Title: Great Chapter
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting good. I love it when she argues with Ron, lol. She just makes him so confused. Heh, reminds me of a relative I have. I was wondering if and how InuYasha was going to come across Kagome and his daughter. Cant wait to see what happens next. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: FataLFeline On: April 19, 2006 15:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE NOW NOW NOW!!!!!!!!!! er... plz? ~Cat
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Reviewed By: SilvR_Sword [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give it a ten for overall rating, due to the fact that you came through with the emotions sooo well. It was definately a good piece, however, not as thrilling as the others. I think that you will end up writing one of the best fanfics yet. You're doing great!
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Reviewed By: frostyshake [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 19:51 CDT
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I love the twits you keep throwing at us, it only makes me want to keep reading and find out what happened those 500 years ago.
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Title: Blue
Reviewed By: Frau On: April 03, 2006 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great premise, good pacing and well-drawn characters. You hold close to the original characters personalities which makes the story very enjoyable and quite believeable. I'm enjoying it immensely, please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Silverskies906 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! So many cliffhangers but i hate to say thats what makes it interesting. Me and your story have a love hate relationship. i love it, it hates me. i love reading this story. usually i only like to read finished stories cuz i hate having to wait, it kills me, but for yours i dont really mind. anyway my computer lies to me its evil! it says you have updated it when you have it just to get my hopes up, then says you haven't so i dont read it. EVIL! so now i go through it just to make sure. that is how dedicated i am. anyway i love your story plz oh plz update more the suspence is killing me!! I loved this chapter i was thinking 'dammnit if inuyasha doesnt cry i swer i will!' he didnt i did, well on the inside orelse my bro would have told me i was crazy. not that hee doesnt do that already but you know. UPDATE! plz do it be for i die of worry and curiosity.
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