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Title: Chapter 17: Remembrance
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Happy Birthday to you!!! Great update and Awesome detail on the lemon. Take care and hope you get everything you've ever wanted on your special day.
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Reviewed By: ezaangel(nsi) On: June 28, 2006 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY,I loved this chapter very sad and angsty. Update soon
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Reviewed By: HigherBeing(not signed in) On: June 28, 2006 22:07 CDT
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eeek!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!... hah, and you thought I forgot... keh!
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Title: Yo...
Reviewed By: HigherBeing(not signed in) On: June 28, 2006 22:06 CDT
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Wow... I think it's safe to say for everyone, that was pretty insense, indeed. But another thing: For once in my life... I don't really know what's going to happen next. I've always had this... this thing that told me a close similarity, or a dead on true guess about what's going to happen in any type of situation... But here... I can't really pick up anything... That impresses and and astonishes me all at the same time!!! A new expirience... shweet. Oh, and I also agree with Brazen Thought, the review before mine... What if he was in some kind of trance? But then again... I find it a bit unlikely... But then again... who knows... hmm.... *Ron pops up*... "You can't carry that to the Jano Awards" he says seriously. I stare at him with an open mouth, "... it's just a grappling hook... and the Jano awards haven't even started yet... leave me be and go stalk Jakotsu or something?" I trot back to the drawing board as Ron sashays away. "TO THE DRAWING BOARD... AGAIN!" *poofs into bedroom*... "MOM!!! I can't find the portal that I hid my blue prints in!" Mom shouts, "The portal to the dark abyss is in your closet!" Me:"I AM in my closet!" Mom:"Did your brother take it?!" Me:" The dark abyss?" Mom: "... no... the blue prints..." She says sarcastically... Me:*eye roll*
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was seriously going to start screaming at the story. I would have felt just like Kagome did. I can't wait to read more, one of my favorite stories. But sometimes I just want to choke Inuyasha for being an idiot...*sighs* good job and happy birthday!!
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Reviewed By: rainydays (nsi) On: June 28, 2006 21:54 CDT
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First and foremost, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! I hope it was an awesome day. I liked that this chapter had some background info... however, I hope that wasn't really Inu or he wasn't himself. Poor Kagome. Yikes! Anyways, great job!!! :o) I love this story!!!
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Reviewed By: brazen thought On: June 28, 2006 21:24 CDT
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Hey Happy Birthday! That scene was intense. So that's what happened to have caused Kagome so much damage. I am truly hoping that Inuyasha was under some kind of spell that forced him to be so loving with Kikyo. But ugh if he wasn't......hmm
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Reviewed By: Kuro64 On: June 28, 2006 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Live the Story so Far and Happy Birthday!
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Reviewed By: Bluesavorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good good good. Update soon dammit!!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To da Jano Awards then! They won't let me have a ticket so Im gonna have ta sneak in with Inu and the group!
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Reviewed By: naughtygrl On: June 21, 2006 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOH, suspense!
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great update! Can't wait until we read about Inuyasha and Kagome meeting again. Awesome writing and detail. Take care.
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 14:15 CDT
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Not to be a giddy school girl or anything but.... EEEEEEEEEEEE-AAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love Sachiko! She's the cutest character! ^_^ Oh, I almost forgot. One ticket to the Jano Awards please! ^_^ ... *Ron pops up and tells me that I can't go*.... And why the hell not, Ron?! "All full." Says Ron ... *eye twitch*... We'll see about that. I'll be the one leaning over the side of the balcony for a better look. ^_^ UNTIL NEXT TIME, MAI!!!! *grabs grappling hook, rope, walkie-talkie and skips off to the drawing board*
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Reviewed By: rainydays *nsi* On: June 20, 2006 13:04 CDT
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i liked the chapter! it was short.. but it contained a lot of introductions.. like with Souta and Kagome's mother, and the whole Jano Awards. Ahh! I hope they find each other soon!! :o) That would make me happy! Thanks for the update!! I eagerly await your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42(to lazy to sign back in) On: June 20, 2006 11:40 CDT
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Me be very very angry if you leave story like that. and me knows me talking like tarzan but me don't care. update and me promise that me stop talking like tarzan. you have goodday noe. ~Me Cricket42
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